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Soul Unique

Hi. Sorry about the late reply. Will explain later ... folks who know me would be able to figure out who I am if i explained now.

Appreciate the review and comments. The voice probably won't get any better, being that I'm 70 years old!

Thanks again.
11-Aug-2016
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That Wasn't In Our Plans

Killer opening. Great overall quality, sounds like great instrumentation.Love that lead guitar. Lead vocal could be a little stronger. Adequate but dosent "lift" the song up. Background singers would def lift it up some more, make the cut more solid. The best things are the production and the instrumentation. Lyrics are ok, but I think they could be a little more imaginative. But nice, pleasant song.


Hi. Sorry about the late reply. Will explain later ... folks who know me would be able to figure out who I am if i explained now.

Appreciate the review and comments. The voice probably won't get any better, being that I'm 70 years old!

Thanks again.
11-Aug-2016
For the review on
That Wasn't In Our Plans

Killer opening. Great overall quality, sounds like great instrumentation.Love that lead guitar. Lead vocal could be a little stronger. Adequate but dosent "lift" the song up. Background singers would def lift it up some more, make the cut more solid. The best things are the production and the instrumentation. Lyrics are ok, but I think they could be a little more imaginative. But nice, pleasant song.


bigedwood
Thanks for the review. Glad you were entertained :)
06-Aug-2016
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Sands of Afghanistan by bigedwood

Starts off very different.Good combination of odd instruments and sounds. Then goes retro 70's on you. Kick ass 70's rock song. I would take the echo off the voice, think its too much. Otherwise, legit classic rock cut.Deep words. The music goes well with the lyrics. I could see this song in "Apocalypse Now". Movie. Honestly, great job with this. Great ending as well.


Jakov Smirnov
Thanks!
01-Aug-2016
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I'm going home by Jakov Smirnov

Really nice guitar work....Good mix on the vocals. Good mix on instrments. Good chorus. The song is pretty much done as well as it could be done. Builds up at end just nicely. Im not really crazy about the song itself, But it is done professionally and well done.Best of luck


John David Coupland
Thanks SU, much appreciated.
23-Jul-2016
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Lightning by John David Coupland

nice poppy, happy tune. Reminds me of 60's almost beach music. If that's what you were going for you hit it right on the head. Instrumentation tight and professional. Like the nice 'reverb' overall sound.As far as being a major hit, I don't see it, but a really nice, laid back cut performed with enthusiasm and control. I really cant comment negatively on this because it is performed really well.You blew this genre out the water. I gave you a 4 because of lack of hit potential in today's time. Maybe a drum breakdown to change up would add to it. Maybe shouting a word out at a certain time, circa "Tequila" may bring out it's novelty and invite more ears to listen to it. Good job tho. Best of luck.


2USband
Thanx for your feedback. We`ll keep on working to improve.
21-Jul-2016
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Love and hate by 2USband

Nice piano at beginning. Not a bad hook. I think you can improve on it, though. I Like the guitar solo in middle of song. May consider getting a stronger, rock vocalist for the lead. The singer is cool for the song, but there are some pitchyness (which can be fixed w mellodyne.) As a whole I think the song is a 4, Maybe some more background singers to accentuate the chorus. That "Love and Hate" should really be emotional and coming out, like a Pat Benatar.IN a way I think the song is to tame and needs to be more aggressive. I think that would be amazing. Good luck to you.


StormyFalls55
I only have my iPhone & iPad to record off of right now!
18-Jul-2016
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Starting Over by StormyFalls55

Very original. Wish I could see the words. Sounds like you are a good songwriter.The actual song is not bad at all.This is what I consider a first draft, unproduced demo. Not produced, just to let someone hear the song, which is cool. But when you are putting your product out there for people to judge, I would suggest you not present something like that.. I would go ahead and get the song professionally produced, and then resubmit. Sounds like the tracks are tight and well arranged.The cut just needs professional attention. So the positive here is that I think it can be a good song with some tlc, and the negative is the production is not very good. Best of luck.I gave you a 3 because I think you are a good songwriter, so I feel you should build on that.


michaelross
Thank you for giving this a listen.Will consider all of your thoughts.
18-Jul-2016
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Wish That We Could Talk by michaelross

I can definitely appreciate the feelings coming across in this song. Words are very touching. I would suggest maybe try to make them a little more imaginative. Great musicianship. Right in the pocket. I don't know if you wanna try background singers on the chorus. I would at least try it. We all understand that our song can always be improved, no matter how much we think its finished. I definitely feel there is that personal connection with you and the song, which is touching, and can play across to the audience. And I think with the right adjustments, there will be a great improvement.The production was very good.And I would suggest more expression in the vocals.


michaelross
Thank you for your comments.I get what you are saying.I will look into your points of interest.You did give me some ideas.I just had something to say to someone.
17-Jul-2016
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Alice's Mind by michaelross

Vocals are ok. Mix is fine. Not a lot going in the song. Very unique.Maybe every now and then double,chorus your voice just to add some different flavor. Good words, thank you for posting lyrics. My honest opnion is its not a bad song at all, just not the "hit" potential you probably want (at this point). And maybe you are not looking for a hit, so that's cool as well. I suggest you restructure, accentuate the hook part if there is one.When you are singing your lines, every now and then put a killer guitar tag behind vocal (behind best lyrics). Wake up your audience by giving them things they don't expect.I really like your lyrics. Very good. Maybe a little more 'umph' on lead vocal to bring out those great words.Otherwise, good effort..:) I always say, great songs are rewritten, not written. Best of luck to you........


Wallace
Thank you for your kind and thoughtful review. I really appreciate the time spent on doing it.
15-Jul-2016
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Water to the Mill by Wallace

Wonderful. Like a piano ray of sunshine.We need more "Bach's" in the world today. Especially LOVED the second one! The chords remind me of Jaco Pastorius ,strangely enough. This goes beyond simple RnB/Pop structures. Thinking man's music. Very pretty and unpredictable. For that you get a 5 from me.Best of luck to you



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