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pmauk1
Thanks a million (dollars!!)
09-May-2013
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Settle for the City )Money rap) by pmauk1

A great song with a strong lyrical thread and a light-hearted tone. Entertaining rhymes, and a popular topic for this day in age $$$... This song IS MONEY! Couldn't resist the pun. Technically, the song sounds excellent, but occasionally while I was listening the song would cut out for a split second here and there. My internet, perhaps? At any rate, it didn't factor into my rating, just wanted to let you know.


LIL FREEZE 413
ok
23-Mar-2013
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Tip Top by LIL FREEZE 413

Nice banging beats, though the shuffle / bead scratch element sounds a little too clean & computerized for my taste. Maybe dabble that in there a little less consistently? I like the horns and the tension points set up with the bell strike, when you let the beats breathe - all in all it's a great substructure for whatever other elements jump into the act!


LIL FREEZE 413
I'll make sure to take that.
23-Mar-2013
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Tip Top by LIL FREEZE 413

Nice banging beats, though the shuffle / bead scratch element sounds a little too clean & computerized for my taste. Maybe dabble that in there a little less consistently? I like the horns and the tension points set up with the bell strike, when you let the beats breathe - all in all it's a great substructure for whatever other elements jump into the act!


pmalman
Thank you! :)
17-Mar-2013
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Hello My Friend ver.1 by pmalman

Jazzy and toe tapping, this tune is! A spoken (instrument voice) beginning really helps the listener hear the dialogue you speak of... a mental narrative begins to form - and the the addition of all the other elements - a fine smooth beat and polyrhythmic interweavings of all the other voices. Very well done! I can hear no technical suggestions - you have a solid offering with this track


sowjicse58
hi Gabriowl,
many heartful thanks for encouraging,
Really thanks for beautiful comments.
i got tears in my eyes due to happiness by seeing ur comments.
once again great and heartful thanks to u my friend.
17-Mar-2013
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Annamaya keerhtana by sowjicse58

Heartfelt passion in this voice! I love how my mind is transported to a place beyond thought, outside the box, and inside my self. A beautiful journey into soundscapes of the human vocal dynamic - I listen forward to more of this music!


p13012
I appreciate the comparison to Morphine. I'm not as familiar with them, so I'll have to check them out. Me and my friend who write these songs are just hobbyists. So it's a great compliment to hear we wrote a song that people might want to buy someday...
16-Mar-2013
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Loser by p13012

A rocking tune you have going here! Starts out smooth and smoky like Morphine, and builds to a driving pitch. Well done! I hear many areas I really like, and only a couple of little elements that I think will be fixed when you get some studio production. I wish you well with that process, because I think you have a real marketable song with this one! Keep up the great play ;-)


Anonymous Member
Thank you for the translation - it IS a playful song - I love it! It's cool that my interpretation of the music went along with the tone of the lyrics. Fun Stuff!
15-Mar-2013
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HOMPIMPAH ( children's song ) by sambobo

What a playful and catchy tune! I wonder what the words mean? This is a solidly assembled song, everything from the steady bass groove to the playful dancing of the vocals. There may be a little room to spice up the song, maybe a repeat of the main chorus to get those kids singing along, or a section where it breaks down, the vocals become simpler, and becomes very memorable for younger minds. A fun listen for my Thursday shades... thank you for that, and keep up the great play!


sambobo
wow, .. I enjoyed reading your comment.
hompimpa hompimpa hompimpa alaium gambreng , come play hide and seek, count from 1 to 10, I'm hiding, you're looking for, but do not peek,
it's not fair (pronounced spoiled) :)
15-Mar-2013
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HOMPIMPAH ( children's song ) by sambobo

What a playful and catchy tune! I wonder what the words mean? This is a solidly assembled song, everything from the steady bass groove to the playful dancing of the vocals. There may be a little room to spice up the song, maybe a repeat of the main chorus to get those kids singing along, or a section where it breaks down, the vocals become simpler, and becomes very memorable for younger minds. A fun listen for my Thursday shades... thank you for that, and keep up the great play!


vanirof
Thank you for listening and reviewing.I try to capture the moment and surroundings when i play.
15-Mar-2013
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Hold by vanirof

I like how this music channels the present - it reminds me of when I'm sitting at the piano, just letting it play me instead of the other way around. There's something to be said for just letting the stream come through untouched by the ego of an editing ear. I enjoy the exercise of listening in on your musical moment!


PaludalMelodyFactory
Thank you very much for listening.
I am glad to have your high rating. Also, I am glad that this song is classified as nu-jazz (Actually I did not know the word, nu-jazz. Thank you very much) or smooth jazz. For arrangement, I already changed some and this song might be included in a future album. But I would like to consider to submit.
For jazz thing, I am now studying.
Thank you very much for your attention and time.
14-Mar-2013
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Song474 Re-arranged by PaludalMelodyFactory

Awesome nu-jazz / smooth jazz song you have constructed here! The melody lines, while intricately woven, each maintain their clear musical voice, which makes for a complex and engaging listen. I don't hear any technical suggestions that jump right out at me. I love the smooth electric guitar lines too - I think you have a genre winner with this song - I could hear it being played on smooth jazz stations all over the place - you should submit it to some for consideration!



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