Great beat. Very thoughtful composition. The segues need to move seamlessly, but perhaps the jerkiness was intentional. Keyboards are excellent. Nice guitar solo. Not a big fan of rhythm machines, but if this was all produced by one individual it is fantastic!

Terrific inspiration piece. Good form, content. Well developed opening, chorus and ending. A capella delivery was perfect venue. (I am judging composition only, not instrument--but there is enough promise there to take a few voice lessons and really shine.) I read you have a second verse. That's also great. The second verse would be good to put in the comments/lyrics section somewhere.