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Very pretty song...didn't sound typical classical but that is not to say I didn't like it as it was pleasing to the ear.
It actually came across as something, with the right instrumentation, could be a soft rock/pop song.
If so, I would add a middle eight change or maybe a chorus .
In any case, I did like it...good job whoever you are!
I am not sure what happened to the "total" song as it ended abruptly. In reading your lyrics it appears you left off some lines, particularly that about your children.
But still this is a quite beautiful and meaningful song. I would really love to hear it its completeness.
Very nice love song, a remembrance from days gone by. I really liked the lyrics, I can tell this is from the heart.
Simple but lovely melody. To many modern songs obscure the melody in exchange for the beat if that makes sense.
You played and sang this very well. Beautiful song!
I liked the melody very much. It had a soothing quality that was somewhat forlorn. You played it nicely. I liked the simple arrangement.
The only thing negative was this: listen to the very first note that starts the song. It's likely not the note itself but the instrument voice used. But every time that note is played, at least early in the song, it sustains a little long and overrides the song melody.
But not sure it was avoidable unless you used a totally different voice for the melody line. Still this was certainly a favorite song of mine in this genre. I believe you will do quite well in this contest.
well composed and well played;nice rhythm;nice and easy tone;it sounds pleasurable to the listening mind
It sounds good;well composed,well played and well sang with good rhythm;I couldn't find anything wrong with it