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For being so young, you are doing good at writing and performing.
The arrangement was a little distracting to me...as the bass was a little strong and the echo as well.
I would have brought the vocals up more in the mix.
But as to the song itself it was a good effort.
Quite unusual arrangement which made it interesting.
The singing was very good. The mix was okay but could have been a little better in that it was not quite clear in places.
But still, I liked the lyrics and the beat.
I love the message especially in this day and time of division.
It sounded great with just you and the guitar. You sang it well. But this would be a real cool song with backup instruments.
You did a great job communicating your message. The melody and instrumentation was quite good. You sang it beautifully. For me the only thing that I thought could be improved was likely outside of your control. I think the final mastering could be improved, i.e. EQ and compression. There were times I struggled to understand the lyrics. But honestly, I really like the song and you performed it very well.