Very nice song...liked the words....I would have started the words much sooner....but very worthy message. As usual you narrated it so well. Your pauses and emphasis is right on! Very good job!
For some reason the music on this made me smile. It was like being taken into your dream.
Nice message, lyrics.
You did great job expressing the words.
Keep it up...your talent shines!
What a sad song...hood lyrics. Your background guitar was nice. But the move showing two people loving was hopeful.
You certainly are in touch with emotions and the life around you!
As usual you are a great lyricist. The music was uplifting which fit the song's message.
Your emotion is communicated very well with the pauses and emphasis on phrasing.
The music was good. I liked the wood wind...the other instrument kind of distracted me...but overall I liked the song...mostly your lyrics!
This was a nice song...as usual you did great on the lyrics, and the music was very unique and interesting!
You are very talented. The banjo was awesome...great playing.
That made it more attractive!
Very nice composition. It had a unique but nice melody that kept it interesting.
You did great on the lyrics and the vocals.
The mic was a little close and distorted your voice but you did a great job performing it!
Words are great! It is right on the message....I found the background music very distracting though and for me at least, it did not fit the mood you conveyed through your words. You are so talented....I look forward to more of your entries...please do not let my rating score hamper you cause I know these songs are our children and we take these ratings personally...but I believe honest reviews are so important for all of us songwriters...Keep up the good work!
I like the audio mixed in between the midi. I would just propose that there would be more "real instruments" involved.
If you ever need help with adding, get ahold of me, I would love to help!