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Very nice groove setup from the beginning. The very rhythmic vocals are great over the drum beat and provide lots of drive for the piece. It would be nice to see your lyrics posted. They sound very interesting.
This is a very interesting approach that works well.
Very haunting intro. The female voice is very nice. The music is very interesting and the slightly jazzy groove is cool. I think this has a lot of commercial appeal and would probably be well suited to a movie soundtrack.
Really nice work.
Very nice music and harmonies. The track has a very nice feel to it. The lyrics seem to flow well with the music and the melody is pleasing.
The recording is good and has a nice sound. You could have probably used a little less reverb, but that's not a big issue. You may want to check a few of the vocal harmonies.
Hey another original track, fresh to hear, but this one seems to suffer greatly on the quality of you vocal focus. I hear the vibe you were heading for, but remember just because we finish doesn't mean we're done. Recording takes a deep focus and a very critical self aware ear. I really like that part that says tell me what you seem, you took that Shabba ting a linga style and crossed it. That's cool and funky original. I just really think this song suffers in the vocal areas. They don't seem to merger together with self nor in the following verses. The transitions need to be focused on, you have a strong drive and youthful desire. Use that you take your time..you have all the time you need to clean this up and present it to the world with a powerful clarity. It's not about mastering quality, we all master differently, it's about the actual recording techniques used, that you must elevate. Like mic positioning, chorus bridges and melody structures. These are critical when trying to master your craft. Or you could say bunk him and sound like these industry fools dying to steal the next failing artist's style. Hold tite young soldier you have a hard road to walk, but I would walk it if i were you. Nothing comes from a free ride.Cheers and Good luck I think you have it in you to be fresh and new to a whole new box of crowds. Just depends on your goals and desires. Desire the lime light and you maybe overshun, but fine depth and meaning in you music and direct it as it directs you and that direction shall lead you upon the path of a true musicianal artist. Hope to see you on the road (so to speak)
Now I'm digging this here, fresh original & tricky. its so hypnotic and yet it has that killer groove that just makes you knod your own self to sleep. I love that style your riding with your lyrics. You would have sounded killer on this track I call Murder That. Not as crude as the name leads on to be. You have a good ear for your style. I would take this and mater this style and pro'FECT that technique. This song could be your break out song. Especially if that's all you, with no royalty payout. You rode this song out.. % stars to me mate.
This is a very interesting composition. I'm not sure what can be done lyrically because the song and the structure is rather nice. I just think you could elevate this if it had a better vocal quality to hear and judge. But I was feeling it the longer it was on mate. That tempo kick or treble hit is rather intense though , you might want to level it down a 2 points. but I think this is rather original and with your youth you have plenty of time to crisp the edges. Cheers mate Ps if the quality to hear you was just a little bit better i could give you another star. I edit my reviews, so if you reup load another version hit me up personal k mate Cheers
This is actually pretty good music. Nice catchy melody and rhythm. Very good energy throughout the song. The only problem is the performance and recording, mixing and mastering. If you don't have the means to improve the sound quality, at least work on your singing. Hit the right notes and keep the good energy you've already got.
Unfortunately the vocal is off in this song. It also seems rather random. No matter how precise the beat is, you cant get there in this situation without cleanly presented singing.
It sounds good and you've got the talent;your style of r& b is different from the universally and popularly-known ones so you might have to promote it more for it to gain worldwide attention