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the tune sounds good and you played it nicely and your composition sounds good;i wish you the best in your endeavours
sounds very experimental guitar sounds out of tune or something to me or wrong effects used
The beat was good but the track didn't progress that much from its original state. i liked the style though id like to hear a modified version
I'm guessing the slightly un-tuned guitars were a deliberate move on your part to create the feeling of deterioration? Whether you intended it or not it works quite well for this piece. The lyrics need some work I'm afraid as there's not quite enough there to grab my attention. Again I would say that your music has got the potential to be aimed at a 'Contemporary' film genre. You do need to work on the lyrics though.
I would have liked to have heard more of the vocal on this as it was a little hard to understand what you were singing at times. The overall effect of the music though would lend itself well to certain film genres I thought.
Very well produced atmospheric work. Good scary special FX and an intense rhythm section give this a great overall feel. Well done.
A lot of crackling noise at the start (fire). Did you intend this? The rhythm was pleasing enough but mostly chord progressions. Not enough of a melody and structure to hold the attention of the listeners. The voice was cool but I could not make out what was being said.
Quite a haunting piece. Unusual sounds and guitar work. My only issue is the vocals. I could only make out a few of the phrases.
This track has the potential to be something but definitely needs some cleaning up and I would have also like more lyrics. Also some of the guitar parts need some work.
Good concept. Creates the idea of deteirioation. You could have added a few more lyrics. Guitars slightly de-detuned unless you wanted it that way. I think this tune could be much more. Best wishes.