this is nice song. This is a great sound. Reminds me of something from late 40's or early 50's. The music though sounded like it was your keyboard preprogrammed music which was artificial.
The bridge was predictable with the staccato starts and stops which was amateurish.
I would work on the lyrics a bit. As they cadence was a little off in places, the rhymes and syllables were not quite together.
The best part was your singing. I like the tonality but need some work on adding life to the vocals, tremolo.
It could be the mastering and mixing were not so great.
But really impressed by your efforts. It is good to hear senior citizens who continue to sing and not give up way past their era of music has passed. Some music is universal and the Sinatra era of music is that way.
My grandmother loves this type of music and she was floored by your music. She asked me if you were related to the Lennon sisters.
Keep doing your thing!
It sounds good;You've got good vocals which is good asset for singing and you delivered the track right;I couldn't find anything wrong
Amazing sound recording. I liked the arrangement of instruments chosen in this song. You have a very nice voice well suited for this song. Excellent lyrics. The song kind of brings me back in time.
Very nice. The music is beautiful. Your signing is beautiful as well. The song clearly comes from the heart. Love the lyrics. Well done.