Very interesting melding of styles. There's a lot of things going on here that are interesting. I think the rhythm is very 70's in terms of drive and the overall feel. The metal component is interesting and adds quite a different feel to the metal genre.
The mix and mastering are well done. Everything is clear and intelligible. The stereo space is well used.
I appreciate the incorporation of multiple styles. After all, music is a very subjective thing. This approach I can appreciate. Great job.
It sounds good;well composed,played and well delivered;I couldn't find anything wrong with it;All the best
On a scale of 1-6, 6 being best:
1. Mixing: 5.1
2. EQ: 4.8
3. Production: 5.7
4. Harmony: 4.2
5. Melody: 3.9
6. Structure: 5.9
7. Performance: 5.9
8. Originality: 6.0
It sounds good;the rhythm or beat rocks and it could appeal to different fans of different genre;the vocals is powerful
Really? What is this supposed to be? It continue to amaze me how thse SONGs be put outa there and we are expect to grade them on the finesses pf recording when this is loud and ravolting ofennsive words. If mission is tio simply shock peoples well you did it masterfuly.
I would not play this on my front porch for little kids who trick or treat.
But as far as efort, you did very good. Somtimes efort trumps the quality of the actual music. I do your kinda music in my band and I can send you somethin that may help you compose with more confidence.
I do commend your try though. It reminds me of how i started out. So dont be discourage and keep pluging away.