lyrics were good for a rock song. expressing your thoughts and feelings of war is good. lyrics were good. instrumentals were good. vocals were good.
It sounds good;well composed and well played;I couldn't find anything wrong with it;I wish you the best in your endeavors
Very cool! I like all parts - verse, chorus and break. My favorite part is the break. It made me think of Rush - mostly because of the bass. I thought the drums sounded great. This is a little in the pop direction for you, and you did it well. Of course it's about as much pop as "The Whistler," i.e. prog/pop. And I did like the Tull reference. Well done, as always. That's what I expect and that's what you deliver. This makes me hungry for more of your new material. Thanks for sharing!
-just brilliant lyrics that are quite captivating and says it like it is in flow smoothly with the enjambment which is understood throughout the writing without a hiccup or a syntactical break.
-The music is very befitting and relative to the words or the lyrics.
-I enjoy this one immensely and a great job.
nice track;well composed;the rhythm sounds good;the instrumentation sounds good and the vocals was greatly executed
This one has a little bit of an R & B groove. It's nice to hear you take chances with your vocal range. It sounds good. This has a definite 70's/80's feel to it. I like the keyboard solo. Really well done!
I like the prominent role of the bass on this. The keyboards sound great, as always. You mix up the instrumentation so well that the lack of a chorus isn't noticeable. There are some very nice instrumental breaks, though. In this time of divisiveness, it's good to hear a well-written, hopeful, and unifying song. Your vocal phrasing is very good, which is something I struggle with. You keep it interesting, instead of just singing the lines. Very nice!
Great use of effects (or, are those your dogs!?). The organ sounds great and fits well. I think that's violin plucking I hear, not sure. Works though. As usual, you pick songs that suit your voice well. Obviously, this song is in the mode of "Another Christmas Song," by Tull. Nothing wrong with that! Your song is unique. I can tell that the guitar is real - thank you! The lyrics paint a vivid picture.
Reflection breaks, the dog howls
Returning from the places
That we've never been
Spoken words - straight out of "Passion Play," in style, that is. Love it. Really love this song. It's a little "busier" than I would choose to make it, but it certainly held my interest with all of the interweaving parts. Superbly done!
it sounds good and it's got a unique style of it's own;I couldn't find anything wrong with;I wish you the best
This song really speaks to me. I consider myself a lost soul. You've got a good voice which fits the song to a tee. Good production. Sound quality great.yeah keep up the good work.