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Your rock instrumental does rock for real,you've got the skills and the talent,go ahead and do your thing,all the best
I hope you are doing well.
A lot of talent on that keyboard! Love the ending -- the fade out is cool. Good post. :)
Good lyrics wish someone was singing! The title rocks. :) The ending is cool.
I hope you have a good, short week! :D
nicely composed and well played,it sounds pleasurable to the listening mind,cool like that,i wish you the best
Hello Brian, :)
How are you doing? I hope you are well.
Your lyrics are outstanding. I did find some nits:
but little too little too late (I keep thinking of the song from the 80's here -- maybe you could rearrange this or use different words to make it really original.)
This rhyme is really cool:
No money for their salvation
No grace for their administration (did you mean Trump's administration? I remember laughing, but not really in fun, when he uttered how he would have run into Parkland even if he didn't have a gun. How crazy is this man?)
Well, please take care,
PS: I also wrote a special Flower for the shootings. Hopefully, the kids will make a difference. I sure hope that Trump is voted out (and all his staff).
PS: I put Flower up for a Seal on Fanstory. I didn't get one, but I did get invaluable advice from professional writers. I'm editing and rearranging; also adding! :P
I like it. Nice lyrics too. It would have been nice to have heard them added to the music to see how it sounded together.
Your tracks always sound good and it's got what it takes to appeal to the general public;As always,i wish you the best
Good percussion, nice guitar, and awesome beat. Bryon, keep up the good work. :)
Flower Power is done if you want to check out the last story.
Good percussion. I like the drums in the middle of the piece.
I hope you are doing well. I guess the video is going to take a bit longer, Mark is working his tail off at Walmart. I feel I'm losing him as an illustrator. Hope not!
Please TC and have a great week.
You've got the skills and the talent no doubt,as always,I wish you the best and the good luck that we all need