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Eucalyptus Breeze


Nice job, liked the feel of the music....the lyrics were especially good. The music envoked the feel of the ocean, being amidst the waves ebb and flow.
Comment Written 02-Sep-2017 by Jimi Seven Reviewed with blinders on.
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2017
    Thank you Jimi stopping by again and listening to one of my songs which I truly appreciate. Your expertise can help me a long way and I thank you for your time.


Walk the Dog!


There was a lot I liked about this....I would have le as an acoustic number but leaving the strings out as they distracted from the guitar which I liked. The bass was too loud and I would have simply left it out...sometimes less is more and I think this with only the guitar could be quite nice!
Comment Written 02-Sep-2017 by Jimi Seven Reviewed with blinders on.
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2017
    Cheers, Jimi; this is a work in progress and maybe I shouldn't put it out too soon. I want thank you for pointing out those things that needed to be attended to. As what is that saying it's hard to forest from the trees? I sometimes miss the simple points of a song and make it a little bit too busy. Thanks a lot for your help and take care and have a good one


Young Marilyn


Nice tribute to Marilyn's memory. Liked the instruments. The lyrics were good. You sang it well, was clear and moved at a nice pace.
Comment Written 23-Aug-2017 by Jimi Seven
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2017
    Jimi; thank you for taking your time to listen and review the song which I truly appreciate.
    Alex


Will You Love Me When The Roses Die


Lovely acoustic piece. Nice words...liked the finger picking.
One of your best songs! Wish the recording was better but loved the song!
Comment Written 23-Aug-2017 by Jimi Seven
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2017
    Thank you again, Jimi, for listening and reading the words of this poem which I truly appreciate your time and effort into doing so.
    Alex


Sweet Melinda


Nice song, the flutes went with the music and enhanced it. I like the melody and vocals...very moving song.
Very good job!
Comment Written 23-Aug-2017 by Jimi Seven
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2017
    Thank you Jimi, for reading and reviewing the song which I truly appreciate wholeheartedly.
    Alex


Can't Let Go


This sounds somewhat unclear, some distortion. But I like the beat and genre. You did good job on the lyrics and singing. Just a feel good song...keep it up!
Comment Written 23-Aug-2017 by Jimi Seven
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2017
    This is a very early song done on analog recording which I no longer use I use digital now and it's a very all song from nineteen eighty and the recording somewhat is muddy now I have to rewrite it on digital recording. Thanks for reading and reviewing which I truly appreciate.
    Alex


it's gonna be a long time from now


Liked the beat to the song...I do think the recording quality was not up to par but the performance was fine. You did a good on vocals. The lyrics were fine and the message was a good one.
Comment Written 23-Aug-2017 by Jimi Seven
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2017
    Thank you, Jimi; for being honest with your review which is very important to me and thank you for doing so which I truly appreciate.
    Alex


Love Games


A beautiful song about life, regrets and memories. Sounds like you lived them..Great lyrics, you sang it well.
Was played well.
One of my favs from you! Keep playing, writing....
Comment Written 23-Aug-2017 by Jimi Seven
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2017
    Thank you very much again, Jimi, for taking your time again to read and review the song which I truly appreciate.
    Alex


Unique 2:24


Great rhythmic start to the song. Very creative melody...Love this song. I think this could be something really special if you add vocals to it.
I didn't see it so much techno but a cool, pop/rock song feel to it.
I love what you have done with this!
Comment Written 23-Aug-2017 by Jimi Seven
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2017
    Jimi; thanks again for stopping by and reading and reviewing this work which I truly appreciate your time and effort you put into it.
    Alex


When I Comes To Love (BMI1999)


Sounds like you had a lot of fun doing this....is a catchy melody line. Nice work on the vocals.
The lyrics were good as were backing instruments!
Keep up the good work!
Comment Written 23-Aug-2017 by Jimi Seven
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2017
    Jimi; the girl that is singing with me is Candace Horton who went to Nashville but ended up on the wrong side of the law with her boyfriend and I don't know what become of her now. Thanks so much for read reading and listening which I truly appreciate.
    Alex


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