This is a good song. It can be improved by boosting that guitar and your voice. You have a nice voice and it's very 70's. Like it!
You have a really nice singing voice. Your guitar accompaniment is good too. I like how the song develops. Great job!
You are good and your music sounds good;I couldn't find anything wrong with it;I wish you the best and good luck as well
I like the general feel of this song. That classic blues sound.
The vocals were hit and miss. I know very well (through my own journey as a singer) that this is much easier said than done, but what you're needing is MORE force, LESS tension. Check out "Brett Manning's Singing Success".. it helped me get over some big roadblocks, just from listening to the first few chapters.
One more thing I'll say is that lyrically, political stuff is best expressed more cryptically, in my opinion. When you put it all in bold, black and white, it will turn away a good number of otherwise interested listeners. "Trick them into hearing it" if you will. I personally was very drawn in by the beginning of the lyrics. Then as the political stuff became more obvious, it took more effort to follow.
Keep on Rockin'! or, emmm... Bluesin'.. aw hell just keep on Jammin! lol
This had a decent melody and the vocals were good. The instruments were well played.
The lyrics were rather repetitious though and should have had some variation, maybe more of a pronounced bridge change.
The message was certainly political. I do strongly disagree with comparing building a wall to keep ILLEGAL aliens out to Hitler killing Jews and Christians en mass.
I am in favor of helping those less fortunate than us. Americans provide more charitable contributions routinely and millions to help those in other countries in times of tragedy...like earthquakes, hurricanes, drugs, etc. No one is even a close second.
But I DO NOT support sanctuary cities harboring criminals.
Yes, there needs to be a program to assist the children who have been brought here through no fault of their own.
But comparing what Hitler did to building a wall???
A relative of mine was beaten and raped by an illegal alien in Florida. Don't forget the word ILLEGAL.
And yet these illegals get free education, free medical, allowed to vote in some states.
So try going to Mexico to live as a citizen and see how long you are allowed to stay and what you receive in assistance.
But when you're wife or relative is beaten, raped or worse, I will just say --Why cry?
Well composed;well played;well sang;It sounds good;I couldn't find anything wrong with it;I wish you the best and good luck as well
Nice job, liked the feel of the music....the lyrics were especially good. The music envoked the feel of the ocean, being amidst the waves ebb and flow.
There was a lot I liked about this....I would have le as an acoustic number but leaving the strings out as they distracted from the guitar which I liked. The bass was too loud and I would have simply left it out...sometimes less is more and I think this with only the guitar could be quite nice!
Nice tribute to Marilyn's memory. Liked the instruments. The lyrics were good. You sang it well, was clear and moved at a nice pace.
Lovely acoustic piece. Nice words...liked the finger picking.
One of your best songs! Wish the recording was better but loved the song!