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Border Moon


This is a good song. It can be improved by boosting that guitar and your voice. You have a nice voice and it's very 70's. Like it!
Comment Written 18-Feb-2018 by Danarg
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2018
    Thank you, Danarg , for your spirit to review and after listening to your work, and I'm on it that you are able to listen to mine. I have a cheap studio but I do play live and that's for this recording was coming from so dozen at the studio quality is yours does. Thanks again for reviewing.
    Alex


Border Moon


You have a really nice singing voice. Your guitar accompaniment is good too. I like how the song develops. Great job!
Comment Written 06-Feb-2018 by Jun Naotsuka
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2018
    Thank you very much, Jun, for listening to the song which I truly appreciate the time you put into it, thank you again and God bless.
    Alex


Border Moon


You are good and your music sounds good;I couldn't find anything wrong with it;I wish you the best and good luck as well
Comment Written 06-Feb-2018 by Frankie(n)
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2018
    Thank you very much, Frankie (n), For taking your time to listen closely to the song which I truly appreciate wholeheartedly.
    Alex


Why Cry?


I like the general feel of this song. That classic blues sound.

The vocals were hit and miss. I know very well (through my own journey as a singer) that this is much easier said than done, but what you're needing is MORE force, LESS tension. Check out "Brett Manning's Singing Success".. it helped me get over some big roadblocks, just from listening to the first few chapters.

One more thing I'll say is that lyrically, political stuff is best expressed more cryptically, in my opinion. When you put it all in bold, black and white, it will turn away a good number of otherwise interested listeners. "Trick them into hearing it" if you will. I personally was very drawn in by the beginning of the lyrics. Then as the political stuff became more obvious, it took more effort to follow.

Keep on Rockin'! or, emmm... Bluesin'.. aw hell just keep on Jammin! lol
Comment Written 03-Feb-2018 by Somebody Else Reviewed with blinders on.
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2018
    Thank you so much, somebody else, forgive me the tips I needed to definitely become better. I get you on the lyrics and understand and thank you. Thanks for taking your precious time and effort into reading and reviewing the song which I truly appreciate wholeheartedly.


Why Cry?


This had a decent melody and the vocals were good. The instruments were well played.
The lyrics were rather repetitious though and should have had some variation, maybe more of a pronounced bridge change.
The message was certainly political. I do strongly disagree with comparing building a wall to keep ILLEGAL aliens out to Hitler killing Jews and Christians en mass.
I am in favor of helping those less fortunate than us. Americans provide more charitable contributions routinely and millions to help those in other countries in times of tragedy...like earthquakes, hurricanes, drugs, etc. No one is even a close second.
But I DO NOT support sanctuary cities harboring criminals.
Yes, there needs to be a program to assist the children who have been brought here through no fault of their own.
But comparing what Hitler did to building a wall???

A relative of mine was beaten and raped by an illegal alien in Florida. Don't forget the word ILLEGAL.
And yet these illegals get free education, free medical, allowed to vote in some states.

So try going to Mexico to live as a citizen and see how long you are allowed to stay and what you receive in assistance.

But when you're wife or relative is beaten, raped or worse, I will just say --Why cry?

Comment Written 30-Nov-2017 by Jimi Seven Reviewed with blinders on.
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2017
    Thought this was about a music review not an opinion review? You can't respect another person's opinion without comment and how my supposed to respect yours. You probably voted for Trump...!
    We're going to get along just fine. It's too bad it's going in this direction. Take care and have the happiest of holidays.
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2017
    For someone who hasn't posted a song or any music you sure have a lot of knowledge to become a number one reviewer. What are you doing here?


Why Cry?


Well composed;well played;well sang;It sounds good;I couldn't find anything wrong with it;I wish you the best and good luck as well
Comment Written 29-Nov-2017 by Frankie(n) Reviewed with blinders on.
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2017
    Thank you very much, Frankie(n), for your review and your trusting reply which I truly appreciate wholeheartedly.


Eucalyptus Breeze


Nice job, liked the feel of the music....the lyrics were especially good. The music envoked the feel of the ocean, being amidst the waves ebb and flow.
Comment Written 02-Sep-2017 by Jimi Seven Reviewed with blinders on.
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2017
    Thank you Jimi stopping by again and listening to one of my songs which I truly appreciate. Your expertise can help me a long way and I thank you for your time.


Walk the Dog!


There was a lot I liked about this....I would have le as an acoustic number but leaving the strings out as they distracted from the guitar which I liked. The bass was too loud and I would have simply left it out...sometimes less is more and I think this with only the guitar could be quite nice!
Comment Written 02-Sep-2017 by Jimi Seven Reviewed with blinders on.
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2017
    Cheers, Jimi; this is a work in progress and maybe I shouldn't put it out too soon. I want thank you for pointing out those things that needed to be attended to. As what is that saying it's hard to forest from the trees? I sometimes miss the simple points of a song and make it a little bit too busy. Thanks a lot for your help and take care and have a good one


Young Marilyn


Nice tribute to Marilyn's memory. Liked the instruments. The lyrics were good. You sang it well, was clear and moved at a nice pace.
Comment Written 23-Aug-2017 by Jimi Seven
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2017
    Jimi; thank you for taking your time to listen and review the song which I truly appreciate.
    Alex


Will You Love Me When The Roses Die


Lovely acoustic piece. Nice words...liked the finger picking.
One of your best songs! Wish the recording was better but loved the song!
Comment Written 23-Aug-2017 by Jimi Seven
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2017
    Thank you again, Jimi, for listening and reading the words of this poem which I truly appreciate your time and effort into doing so.
    Alex


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