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It's a treat


Not sure how I missed this little gem.

Great job singing this. Catchy tune.This can be played for Halloween. LOL

You need to post some more songs. You are quite talented!

Keep writing and playing!
Comment Written 10-Oct-2017 by Jimi Seven
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2017
    Thank you for making me feel;I am trying to get better


The right People


Your best song that I have heard so far!

I liked the melody and instrumentation....the timing was great...the minor starts and stops....

I liked the way the keyboard threaded around the hook....you could have added an instrumental break as it appeared you were going to do.

Anyway, really good song!
Comment Written 31-Jul-2017 by Jimi Seven
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2017
    thank you very much


If Only


This can often be a situation that any of us can find our selves in...you did great job of sharing that in your song. I liked the short stops.
Good job the way the percussion/bass followed the melody. Vocals were very clear and not over ridden by the instruments; in fact, I would have sound engineer separate the other instruments in the mix so they could be heard more clearly.
Nice song!
Comment Written 31-Jul-2017 by Jimi Seven
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2017
    thank you;worth,noted


(That Girl)


This had catchy beat and theme. I particularly liked the bass line.
I would have added more instrumentation behind the "chorus" That Girl is So fine.

This song with a little work could be a really special song.

Add a middle wight to break up the melody and that will make the listener long to hear the chorus.

Good job!
Comment Written 31-Jul-2017 by Jimi Seven
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2017
    thank you very much for your great review;it shows me that you are very knowledgeable in music


babe stop pretending


Rhythmically the song is driven....but I didn't find it appealing...the baby, stop pretending was not melodic enough for me...
Unfortunately, after the first 45 secs I did not need to hear more as it was more of the same.
On songs like this I would focus on bringing more melody and less repetition.
On the good side I can hear your passion in wanting to perform and I applaud that but would continue ti work on the art of songwriting.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2017 by Jimi Seven
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2017
    thank you very much,advice will help a lot to get me better


Still beautiful


This was a good song; I agree with you that the sound mastering by the engineer was a little heavy on the mix which hid a lot of the background instruments.

I liked the song...like the lyrics it is beautiful. It has a nice touch makes me want to hum the song after it's gone...

I would suggest that you work on the "story" aspect of the song to make the song more interesting to the listener, telling the listener how or when you met the girl and lost touch...

Then the main line of the song would come in and out rather than take up most of the song.

But nice feel to the song! Good job..keep posting!

Comment Written 31-Jul-2017 by Jimi Seven
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2017
    thank you,your review is great and very professional and I believe that your advice will help a lot


If Only


I really like this song. I played it a couple of times. One thing that stands out to me is that you hit a good range of octaves, singing highs and lows. The vocals was good, it was a great beat, great guitar behind the beat. I was really feeling the lyrics because I can definitely relate to this song.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2016 by Brandnew
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2016
    you made my day and made feel good;I will try to improve,thank you very much


babe stop pretending


Mind blowing performance sir, really amazing can't stop appreciating u, very good voice culture, all the best sir, expecting similar music type from u, keep rocking sir
drums sound is super ,continue stop pretending u used in song i lke it.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2016 by sowjimusic2
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2016
    Thank you very much,I appreciate your review


It's a treat


A great love treat title itself is amazing, mind blowing, ur voice is very cute with different variations, keep rocking always sir, have a nice day.
Comment Written 11-Mar-2016 by sowjimusic2
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2016
    thank you very much


If Only


Mind blowing performance sir, really amazing can't stop appreciating u, very good voice culture, all the best sir, expecting similar music type from u, keep rocking sir
Comment Written 11-Mar-2016 by sowjimusic2
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2016
    thank you very much


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