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Alone by Sweetpeajr



It sounds good;I couldn't find anything wrong with it;you've got the skills and the talent to make it happen;keep it up .

Creatively on the right track!
Comment Written by Jimi Seven on 16-Mar-2018

sweet boy's by kanana boy's choir



It sounds good;I couldn't find anything wrong with it;you've got the skills and the talent to make it happen;keep it up
Comment Written by Jimi Seven on 16-Mar-2018

Indecisive by Elatt



It sounds good;I couldn't find anything wrong with it;you've got the skills and the talent to make it happen;keep it up
Comment Written by Jimi Seven on 16-Mar-2018

ngiyamthanda by mbeke-mbeke



Good effort. Need to change up music and melody. The lyrics did not get the message across but nice effort.
Comment Written by Jimi Seven on 16-Mar-2018

gibela by mbeke-mbeke



Good effort nut lacks originality. Repetitive loop....needs something to distinguish it and make the listener remember it.
I would recommend a good lyric writing course.
Comment Written by Jimi Seven on 16-Mar-2018

OUI (Julez & Cam) - Ride Out by OnlyUsInc



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Comment Written by Jimi Seven on 28-Jan-2018

Fuc* Rap (I Love Rap) by Clay Day



This is what is wrong with a lot of rap. This is disgusting and filth. One day you will, like all of us, will stand before God and answer for what comes out of our mouths.

Comment Written by Jimi Seven on 28-Jan-2018

Down at the Fishin' Hole by Hellbilly HeartThrob



Very very nice song, great job in all aspects from composing, vocals, instruments. But excellent job with the mixing and mastering.
It's not very often there is a that is executed as well as this. Nice to listen to but for songwriters and performers, this is especially good, Would love to hear more.
Comment Written by Jimi Seven on 07-Dec-2017

Why Cry?



This had a decent melody and the vocals were good. The instruments were well played.
The lyrics were rather repetitious though and should have had some variation, maybe more of a pronounced bridge change.
The message was certainly political. I do strongly disagree with comparing building a wall to keep ILLEGAL aliens out to Hitler killing Jews and Christians en mass.
I am in favor of helping those less fortunate than us. Americans provide more charitable contributions routinely and millions to help those in other countries in times of tragedy...like earthquakes, hurricanes, drugs, etc. No one is even a close second.
But I DO NOT support sanctuary cities harboring criminals.
Yes, there needs to be a program to assist the children who have been brought here through no fault of their own.
But comparing what Hitler did to building a wall???

A relative of mine was beaten and raped by an illegal alien in Florida. Don't forget the word ILLEGAL.
And yet these illegals get free education, free medical, allowed to vote in some states.

So try going to Mexico to live as a citizen and see how long you are allowed to stay and what you receive in assistance.

But when you're wife or relative is beaten, raped or worse, I will just say --Why cry?

Comment Written by Jimi Seven on 30-Nov-2017
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Through the Storm by dglockwood



I like how this starts out very calmly and builds up much like the plabe and pilot who runs into a storm.

Then the chaos comes. You did a good job conveying feel of a storm with crashes and thunder.

I would maybe add a little more low end to convey the feel of thunder more effectively and the fearful experience of a storm.

But nice song as always.
Comment Written by Jimi Seven on 23-Nov-2017


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