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Jimi Seven

Night Town by connor1245



Very nice tune, really liked the rhythm of it. The music was well done.

I really liked the chorus melodic line.

I think the lyrics kind of were not up to the level of the music as after the first two verses it was a repetitious making me feel like I didn't hear anything new --except for the good lead break.

The other thing was the mix needs work on the EQ, compression as it was not very clear, kind of "muddy." But I know that it takes much work to become a decent sound engineer so nice job trying.

Last, I thought your vocals were excellent.

Overall, good job, would like to hear more from you!
Comment Written by Jimi Seven on 05-Nov-2017

Sparks Fly by DJ-MCMUSIC



Really cool vibe to this song. Has a mix of genre's...sort of a Latin Rock feel to it. The rhythm is really nice.

Your vocals are excellent as always. The instruments are played very well.

The vocals were hard for me to make out in the first half of the song but were much clearer in second half of the song.

Also, about half way through the song the bass level went up, or so it seemed tp me.

But this is one of your best songs of many excellent songs. Nice dance song.

Great work as always!
Comment Written by Jimi Seven on 28-Oct-2017

Verbal prophesy by WendyP12



Unusual rap song but very good job.

Keep playing and contributing.

Great job! Nice lyrics!

Superb! mAYBE TURN THE BASS UP A LITTLE MORE!
Comment Written by Jimi Seven on 26-Oct-2017

Flower in the Sand by 4th and Long



This is an excellent composition. It has a nice melody and the lyrics are very good. The instruments are played quite well. I especially like the slide guitar. The vocals are even better.

The mix was good. The only suggestion I would offer and it is minor is that the bass seems a little strong and over powered some of the vocals and instruments. But beautiful song.

Really anxious to hear what else you have done since.
Comment Written by Jimi Seven on 26-Oct-2017

Let Go by BethMargaret



For being so young, you are doing good at writing and performing.

The arrangement was a little distracting to me...as the bass was a little strong and the echo as well.


I would have brought the vocals up more in the mix.

But as to the song itself it was a good effort.

Comment Written by Jimi Seven on 20-Oct-2017

Eyes



Quite unusual arrangement which made it interesting.

The singing was very good. The mix was okay but could have been a little better in that it was not quite clear in places.

But still, I liked the lyrics and the beat.

Good performance.
Comment Written by Jimi Seven on 20-Oct-2017
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Okay



I love the message especially in this day and time of division.

It sounded great with just you and the guitar. You sang it well. But this would be a real cool song with backup instruments.

Great job!
Comment Written by Jimi Seven on 20-Oct-2017
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Cheap Love by michellelvis



Very catchy song, quite original.

You sang it well. I liked the music behind it, too. Even though you wrote it 12 years ago, it is timely and goes well today.

I would like to hear more from you. Glad you're back in the game!

Jeep writing and performing!
Comment Written by Jimi Seven on 20-Oct-2017

Wind in Your Hair



Very pretty song...didn't sound typical classical but that is not to say I didn't like it as it was pleasing to the ear.

It actually came across as something, with the right instrumentation, could be a soft rock/pop song.

If so, I would add a middle eight change or maybe a chorus .

In any case, I did like it...good job whoever you are!
Comment Written by Jimi Seven on 20-Oct-2017
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

An Old Mans Song



I am not sure what happened to the "total" song as it ended abruptly. In reading your lyrics it appears you left off some lines, particularly that about your children.

But still this is a quite beautiful and meaningful song. I would really love to hear it its completeness.

Great job!
Comment Written by Jimi Seven on 20-Oct-2017
Read and reviewed with blinders on.


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