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Jimi Seven

Through the Storm by dglockwood



I like how this starts out very calmly and builds up much like the plabe and pilot who runs into a storm.

Then the chaos comes. You did a good job conveying feel of a storm with crashes and thunder.

I would maybe add a little more low end to convey the feel of thunder more effectively and the fearful experience of a storm.

But nice song as always.
Comment Written by Jimi Seven on 23-Nov-2017

Dance Major-2 by bryan taylor



I love the intro and the overall beat.

There seems to be a little too much distortion and I would love to hear the guitar work a little better but very nice song.

You played it very well.

Excellent work.
Comment Written by Jimi Seven on 23-Nov-2017

Karma's Curse by mcdrastic



The good first...

1. Music is okay
2. Your ability to write is very good, in spite of your misspellings

The bad...

In your profile you write "death before dishonor" which sounds quite nice; however, your song, like a lot of rap, uses much vulgarity and cursing which does not further your message. It only shuts down. While I am not above throwing a curse word out in anger, I try not to.

But in the end the Bible and God tells us we will all be accountable for every word that comes forth from our mouths when we stand before Him on judgment day.

But the worse thing in your "song" or rant is that you are quite racist. Black, whites, yellow, brown all can be racist. In this world we should learn to love one another not hate.

For you to write your filthy, hate filled lyrics using phrases such as

" NO HOPPIN' DEAD BEAT USELESS FUCK JUST REMEMBER NOT
EVERYONE'S BORN WITH A SILVER SPOON LIKE YOU WHITE COLLOR CUNTS"

serves no purpose except to propagate hate and anger.

I am partially white and I have suffered from the effects of racism and hate. Plus, I was not born with a silver spoon in mouth. And I now plenty of people of all races, including whites, who are born in less fortunate situations than you will ever know.

And still many poor inner city races of all kinds have risen above crime and drugs.

so you may choose to hate and blame, but please look inward and self-assess, and then turn to God and He will give you strength to grow and find peace and strength.

I will pray for you because I do not know your personal situation. But please do not continue to perform this hate filled composition.

You are quite talented and can write something that offers hope not hate.

Best of luck going forward. If you wish to work together on something or want some advice I will be glad to help my friend.


Comment Written by Jimi Seven on 23-Nov-2017

Abyss by Shane Houghtaling by ShaneHoughtaling



This was a good effort and with the right arrangement it could be something quite nice.

The rhythm was good. At times it sounded monotonous as the guitar strumming lasted for a little too long before you started singing.

The singing was fine but the lyrics were not clear as it sounded like you may have recorded directly into your computer. But that is no fault of your own.

I liked your energy and emotion. So I gave you a good rating for this song. Keep writing and playing!
Comment Written by Jimi Seven on 23-Nov-2017

Tombstone Overture by dglockwood



another epic song, could be a soundtrack...this is so cinematic.

Liked the changes in tempo, percussion.

Never get bored listening to your music!

Great composition!
Comment Written by Jimi Seven on 17-Nov-2017

The Thought Of You by purebobby



very nice song. great voice, good music and melody, post more, reminds me of 40's music, classic Sinatra era
Comment Written by Jimi Seven on 17-Nov-2017

The Industrial Giant by dglockwood



Great song and idea. You nailed the concept musicaly.

I really liked the tempo and the suspense.

Another great performance. You have imagination!
Comment Written by Jimi Seven on 15-Nov-2017

Elbliz_Dance by elblizfirewave



Really good rhythm, you did nice job singing.

The words were hard to understand.

The mix was okay but could have been a little better as the track was just not clear, the separation from low to high was not distinct.

The song was repetitious. But from a dance perspective it was good.
Comment Written by Jimi Seven on 14-Nov-2017

Switching It Up by therealZ-O



Good job and effort. The mix was really "muddy" and made the words hard to make out or separate from the back track. The bass was the same as well as it overdrove the other instruments, loops.

I would work on mixing aspect and work on the EQ and compression when recording and then when mastering the outboard tracks.

But nice effort. The rhythm was good.
Comment Written by Jimi Seven on 14-Nov-2017

IF This is love by Ameena



You did nice job on this. There were things that were good and some that needed improvement.

Here is what I felt needed improvement. It is a formulaic structured song that has been done a little bit much in my opinion. It became rather repetitious as it did not really go anywhere lyrically or melodically. The music, and percussion in particular sounded "gimmicky."

Things that were very good were the vocals and the mix. The performance was good.

I just think this sounded dated and artificial. It lacked pop and drive.

If this had been done 15 years ago I think it would have been refreshing. You have talent so please put out more songs.
Comment Written by Jimi Seven on 14-Nov-2017


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