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Jimi Seven

Looks So Fine by Larry I



You do a fine job of writing lyrics in the traditional version of country music. You might try some other songwriting groups who can also apply various types of music genres, pop, modern country, etc. This is not a criticism but a suggestion so that your talent is mazimized. The music is good but I believe you can go even further with a wider style of music.

I write music more in pop, country rock, classic rock...and would be glad to create some music for your lyrics free of charge just to show you what can be done down a different oath --unless you want to stay in traditional country genre --which is fine.
Comment Written by Jimi Seven on 09-Apr-2018

Love Be Like Before by Larry I



It sounds good;you've got the skills and the talent to make it happen;i believe that it might appeal to the general public
Comment Written by Jimi Seven on 09-Apr-2018

Pretty Sugar Momma by Larry I



It sounds good;you've got the skills and the talent to make it happen;i believe that it might appeal to the general public
Comment Written by Jimi Seven on 09-Apr-2018

If You See Kay by bigedwood



It sounds good;I couldn't find anything wrong with it;you've got the skills and the talent to make it happen;keep it up. Reminds of Kris Kristofferson sp?
Comment Written by Jimi Seven on 16-Mar-2018

Glory by Danarg



Loved the soft touch and emotion that went into this. It is very inspirational. I liked the accent background components that fit nicely without taking away from it. It flows beautifully.
If there is one suggestion I would offer, it is small and likely a matter of preference, maybe to add a build up onto a crescendo somewhere to take us to the top pf the mountain. But again, very nicely done!
Comment Written by Jimi Seven on 16-Mar-2018

Alone by Sweetpeajr



It sounds good;I couldn't find anything wrong with it;you've got the skills and the talent to make it happen;keep it up .

Creatively on the right track!
Comment Written by Jimi Seven on 16-Mar-2018

sweet boy's by kanana boy's choir



It sounds good;I couldn't find anything wrong with it;you've got the skills and the talent to make it happen;keep it up
Comment Written by Jimi Seven on 16-Mar-2018

Indecisive by Elatt



It sounds good;I couldn't find anything wrong with it;you've got the skills and the talent to make it happen;keep it up
Comment Written by Jimi Seven on 16-Mar-2018

ngiyamthanda by mbeke-mbeke



Good effort. Need to change up music and melody. The lyrics did not get the message across but nice effort.
Comment Written by Jimi Seven on 16-Mar-2018

gibela by mbeke-mbeke



Good effort nut lacks originality. Repetitive loop....needs something to distinguish it and make the listener remember it.
I would recommend a good lyric writing course.
Comment Written by Jimi Seven on 16-Mar-2018


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