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Austin@6th St. by bryan taylor



Hello, Bryan,
I hope you are doing well.
A lot of talent on that keyboard! Love the ending -- the fade out is cool. Good post. :)
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Comment Written by rasmine on 10-Jun-2018

Unload The Mad-Hatter by bryan taylor



Hello, Brian,

Good lyrics wish someone was singing! The title rocks. :) The ending is cool.

I hope you have a good, short week! :D

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Comment Written by rasmine on 29-May-2018

The Wah-Wah Blues by bryan taylor



Hello Brian, :)

How are you doing? I hope you are well.

Your lyrics are outstanding. I did find some nits:
but little too little too late (I keep thinking of the song from the 80's here -- maybe you could rearrange this or use different words to make it really original.)

This rhyme is really cool:
No money for their salvation
No grace for their administration (did you mean Trump's administration? I remember laughing, but not really in fun, when he uttered how he would have run into Parkland even if he didn't have a gun. How crazy is this man?)

Well, please take care,
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PS: I also wrote a special Flower for the shootings. Hopefully, the kids will make a difference. I sure hope that Trump is voted out (and all his staff).

Take care,
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PS: I put Flower up for a Seal on Fanstory. I didn't get one, but I did get invaluable advice from professional writers. I'm editing and rearranging; also adding! :P
Comment Written by rasmine on 23-May-2018

Down On 29 by bryan taylor



Good percussion, nice guitar, and awesome beat. Bryon, keep up the good work. :)

Flower Power is done if you want to check out the last story.
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Comment Written by rasmine on 17-Apr-2018

Down On West 29 by bryan taylor



Good percussion. I like the drums in the middle of the piece.
I hope you are doing well. I guess the video is going to take a bit longer, Mark is working his tail off at Walmart. I feel I'm losing him as an illustrator. Hope not!
Please TC and have a great week.
Comment Written by rasmine on 09-Apr-2018

the wind by bryan taylor



Great acoustics!! Congrats!
I may have already given a review for this, but it is very relaxing and gentle.
Keep up the creativity!
Comment Written by rasmine on 25-Feb-2018

alone by bryan taylor



Bryan,
:) Good job! I like the beat, you held it all the way through. The last minute was great.
Do you belong to a group or this is all you? Do you play the drums too? Or it's a synthesizer?
Comment Written by rasmine on 20-Dec-2017

she's in wales-revised by bryan taylor



Good one! One thing -- underwear, not ware -- sorry, more of a writer editor then music one. :P But I do love the guitar and upbeat of this tune.
Comment Written by rasmine on 14-Dec-2017

Dance Major-2 by bryan taylor



Got it! You are rocking away here. This is really good, I'm just wondering if you get gigs -- and I have a question. If we go to videos with Flower Power would you be willing to do the music? It may be a lot of videos cause I'm writing a lot -- not putting them on FanStory right now because of my failing computer, but will once I get a new one. I gave Mark another script so maybe it will be done soon. he is very busy working. Hopefully, this will be work instead of what he is doing.
Comment Written by rasmine on 25-Nov-2017

Dance Major by bryan taylor



Bryon,
Great lyrics. I just need to find a way to play it. I did before so I know I can now, but they should put it on here where we review.
I hope this finds you well. Happy Belated Thanksgiving. :D
Comment Written by rasmine on 25-Nov-2017


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