Certainly got a Beatles vibe to it. Shame you were unable to get some vox on it. I think that would have given it the icing. All the best in the competition.
Addition: OK, I'll give you a 5 for the vocal melody. Now, if you could do the original arrangement with this - I think it would be top notch.
Comment Written by RonD on 27-Jun-2014
Read and reviewed with blinders on.
reply by the artist on 27-Jun-2014
Many thanks for your review. I appreciate your feedback.
reply by the artist on 28-Jun-2014
Hi Ron. I gave some thought to what you said about adding a vocal, and as I had already written words, decided to give it a go myself. It's a completely modified version, slightly more upbeat in tempo also. would love it if you could give it another listen, and tell me what you think.