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Aliceo

Women love good speakers by brain singer



Sorry, since I don't speak your language this didn't mean anything to me. I wish it had a melody so I could enjoy it without knowledge of your language. Your song would be much more effective with melody, harmony and instruments.
Comment Written by Aliceo on 13-Aug-2013

Wandering Melodies by Jaemeraquan



Wandering melodies is a good title. The melody wanders quite a bit. It would hold my interest more if it had more repetition and contrast.
Comment Written by Aliceo on 13-Aug-2013

Stephan's Song by Scott Harvey



Interesting story. I wish there had been a chorus..maybe something along the lines of a big heart is a blessing??? It could also help to convey the emotion, contrasted to the verse that gives the fact of the story. The melody of the verse is fine as a verse but doesn't give me, the listener, enough for it to stand alone. A chorus!!
Comment Written by Aliceo on 13-Aug-2013
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

looking 4 agirl by glucks



They rhythm of your t racks had me moving from the beginning. I enjoyed the overall vibe of the song. I wish you had included the lyrics so I could have better understood what your song was saying.
Comment Written by Aliceo on 13-Aug-2013

This is Forever by pmauk1



I wish that the lyrics had been included. What I could hear did not make me feel like it was "forever". Some more detailed lyrical images might have helped convey the emotion and message.
Comment Written by Aliceo on 13-Aug-2013
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Solitude and I by pmauk1



I wish that the lyrics had been included. The vocal on this recording was a little blurry so it was hard to hear what was being conveyed. The song had a strong retro ( 60's) sound.
Comment Written by Aliceo on 13-Aug-2013

Grace of the swan by John David Coupland
Chapter 1 of the book Birdsong by Harpaxe



A charming, simple melody! You might consider changing the backing track to more of your acoustic guitar??
Comment Written by Aliceo on 13-Aug-2013
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Move it! by matte



The opening led me to anticipate a really high energy composition but I was let down when it didn't follow up with much action. It did not make me want to "move it". I think that it would have more movement if the tempo was a bit faster and the instruments played a division of that faster beat. Also, the electronic instruments were more effective for this than the acoustic ones.
Comment Written by Aliceo on 13-Aug-2013

gezzyofficial ft lloyd & omanterri by gezzyofficial



There is an out of tune sharp sounding instrument in the opening that is really irritating. You lost me from that point.
Comment Written by Aliceo on 13-Aug-2013

You Never Notice Me by box204j



Lovely melody. I especially like the leap of a 6th on the first line.. it adds a tenderness. You have some nice inner rhymes but are not consistent with the overall rhyme scheme. It would be a tighter song if you did. In my opinion the strongest part of the song is the melody. Editing and work on the lyric could make it even better.
Comment Written by Aliceo on 13-Aug-2013


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