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Position Of The Dire by DavidXGabriel



Cheers David;
-the macabre and eeriness of the music suggests a very deep and ominous song. I'm glad you wrote the lyrics because listening to them didn't help but following along with the lyrics did.
-This kind music is not my cup of tea but that doesn't mean it's not good for its style. And I did enjoy it even though it's not what I'd really like to hear but in its own right is very good.
-Thanks for sharing and take care and have a good one.
Alex
Comment Written by akkrys123 on 06-Jul-2017

Put In Work by cor1



Cheers Cor1;
-I really liked your rap in your song and I thought the music went along with the words very well. That's of course when I could understand some of the words being said it is too unfortunate that you didn't print out the lyrics. Good break in good be kept be following through so that considers to be have been good enjambment.
-Thanks for sharing and take care and have a good one especially with all those that you love and care for dearly.
Alex
Comment Written by akkrys123 on 06-Jul-2017

video sampled by bryan taylor



Bryan;
-I am very impressed and as a guitarist myself who only plays rhythm and finger pics I realize how well you can play. I've been playing for over 55 years but I sure can play like that or like the way you play.
-I could use someone like you my recording studio to bed you live in Austin is on the on the Monterey Bay coast California.
-Take care and have a good one and especially good luck in your endeavors.
Alex
Comment Written by akkrys123 on 27-Jun-2017

junk yard dog by bryan taylor



Bryan;
-superb and exceptional guitar work. The guitar could be a little clearer and less money but it's exceptional work. What kind OF guitar ARE YOU using? This all depends ON how it is recorded. A STRAT is a lot different than a HUMBUCKER OR GIBSON.
-Giving you is 6 just on the guitar playing as the recording is just okay.
-Take care and have a good one and good luck in your endeavors.
Alex
Comment Written by akkrys123 on 27-Jun-2017

Her Simple Song by bryan taylor



Bryan;
-the whole song sounds hollow like it's not mastered correctly. The guitar does not have a chorus or compression or doesn't seem like it. In each individual sound is not equalized because they don't stand out by themselves over the speakers for the monitors.
-The song is excellent in the lyrics of fine.
-Drum seems shallow, no depth and very linear.
-A very good song just needs some work recording.
Take care and have a good one and good luck in your endeavors.
Alex
Comment Written by akkrys123 on 27-Jun-2017

the advertisement song by bryan taylor



Bryan;
-I listen to your other stuff and found it much more equalized and compressed. For your attempt for self- promotion has somewhat failed. For it's very muddy and seems not to decompress the equalized right and the instruments are not clear it's all a bunch of spaghetti.
Is exceptionally played and I'm sorry it is not as clear or upfront.
I'll listen to your the stuff.
Alex
Comment Written by akkrys123 on 27-Jun-2017

christmas is a treasure by teepeeme



Teepeenme;
-I see this one has a female voice and the other one had a male voice. Female voices very good could use a little bit more compression and reverb set at a HALL setting. A CHORUS setting could be used for the instruments to separate them more from the voice.
-How to really understand the lyrics with the voice would've been nice to have them written out. That's only in some areas.
-But I think it lacks that special punch or as publishers look at, the hook.
-Overall it's very good.
Alex
Comment Written by akkrys123 on 27-Jun-2017

rainbow in your eyes by teepeeme



Teepeeme;
superb and exceptional lyrics, great voice, a good rock 'n' roll song with inspiration and enlightenment.
-Sluggish and muddy instruments and I think this is do with lack of equalization for the total number. Compression could be excited a little bit separating the voice from the music a little bit more. Ending is much clearer.
Wish there was more about the song I could know about and I wish the mirrors were written. I just feel when one doesn't take the time to write the lyrics, theh're lazy and the song doesn't sound lazy.
Good luck in the future endeavors and take care and have a good one.
Alex
Comment Written by akkrys123 on 27-Jun-2017

Your Own Sake by DavidXGabriel



Hi David X Gabriel; thanks for writing the lyrics it totally help is your vocals were very disturbingly distorted the point of being unrecognized. I feel those little bit too much special effects on the voice and the introduction was a way bit long. I'm glad your writing album I like to listen to more. Compression and equalization works well on the voice and using a 2nd compression with the de-essing would help.
-Good luck on your 2017 album and take care and have a good one.
Alex
Comment Written by akkrys123 on 24-Jun-2017

Miss You Babe by DJ-MCMUSIC



Hi DJ-MCMUSIC; very great some and I really enjoyed listening to it but I was quite disappointed that you didn't take the time to write the lyrics. Otherwise, the song is really good. Take care and have a good one.
Alex
Comment Written by akkrys123 on 24-Jun-2017


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