I love the beat, it has that Old School rap feel mixed with some modern electronic. 4/5 definitely for the beat alone! The lyrics are cool too, just wish the music was a little quieter so I can really hear you.
I couldnt really hear your words because the music over powered you. So you need a little work with the mixing. Because I dont know what your saying, I give you 3 stars, but I'm feeling the beat. There is potential!
I wish your recording was clearer but you have skills and I can tell! It was very creative and complex. I give you 4 out of 5 because of the unclearness of the recording, other than that, you're awesome!