I listened to your sound through a small ear phones.
As I am quite old man, I do not know if my review can be you assist. Please just ignore if not.
A) My guitar ...
Yes, perhaps it would be better if overdrive guitar sound or Feedback guitar sound is there.
B) That little rhythm part ...
... Bass drums - no problem for me
... The third beat sound - a bit too big for me
... Close hi-hat - no problem for me
C) Some sound like a high timbale (move from right to left, or left to right)
Too loud for me. It might be better if this type of sound has depth, which means it sounds like at the far end of stage. Then the sound can present some more flavor to the song, I suppose.
D) Over all
Even though my ear phones can not provide good sound quality, I can listen to this peace rather satisfactory. I suppose that this peace has a possibility to become impressive tune. I am looking forward to listen to it. Thank you for your sharing.
Comment Written by PaludalMelodyFactory on 19-Oct-2012