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Could You Fall

a fantasy about love at first sight

 2 total reviews 
Comment by
SuzieQ
 
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#5 Ranked Reviewer

this is nice song. This is a great sound. Reminds me of something from late 40's or early 50's. The music though sounded like it was your keyboard preprogrammed music which was artificial.

The bridge was predictable with the staccato starts and stops which was amateurish.

I would work on the lyrics a bit. As they cadence was a little off in places, the rhymes and syllables were not quite together.

The best part was your singing. I like the tonality but need some work on adding life to the vocals, tremolo.

It could be the mastering and mixing were not so great.

But really impressed by your efforts. It is good to hear senior citizens who continue to sing and not give up way past their era of music has passed. Some music is universal and the Sinatra era of music is that way.

My grandmother loves this type of music and she was floored by your music. She asked me if you were related to the Lennon sisters.

Keep doing your thing!


 Comment Written 04-Nov-2017


Comment by
Frankie(n)
 
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  Rank:  2
 

#2 Ranked Reviewer

It sounds good;You've got good vocals which is good asset for singing and you delivered the track right;I couldn't find anything wrong


 Comment Written 31-Oct-2017


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