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Take Me

Acoustic guitar and vocals

 2 total reviews 
Comment by
Frankie(n)
 
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Review Stars
  Rank:  2
 

#2 Ranked Reviewer

It sounds good;you've got a good voice and it's cool;however, it seems like the power behind the voice wasn't strong enough


 Comment Written 23-Oct-2017


Comment by
Jimi Seven
 
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#1 Ranked Reviewer!

This a hauntingly beautiful song. I love the timbre of your voice, you sang it beautifully. The lyrics are really good.
The metaphor was perfect.

The guitar and you singing worked well.

I can hear it with keyboard and synth which might take it to the next level. But it stand well as is.

A small thing is that the recording sounds a little "muddy" but again that is small as it sounds like you simply recorded it and posted it. You likely don't have a recording studio and sophisticated equipment available to you.

But you nailed it on this song. Normally I would give a 5 on this song due to the final recording quality. But that is not fair given the circumstances. You wrote a beautiful song and sang it superbly so you deserve a 6.

Thanks for putting this out there for all of us to hear.



 Comment Written 18-Oct-2017



reply by the artist on 19-Oct-2017
    Oh my goodness thank you so much this review made my whole week! I'm blessed to receive your review! And yes I do not have the right equipment, that is something I hope to acquire one day. but in time I can tell that I may. Thank you so much again! I'm excited you enjoyed this song! :)

reply by Jimi Seven on 19-Oct-2017
    Well, some reviewers on the site score a little low because they assume everyone has a nice Digital Audio Workstation (DAW) or access to a studio, etc. On the other hand some reviewers give 5's to about everyone which under values those who deserve a higher score. So I like to be fair and honest without being mean spirited ever --because in the end writing and performing is something we do because we love music. And the truth is that not very many people can create something out of nothing. And even fewer can touch others with their words and music. You have a gift so keep working on it. I started writing my own songs a couple of years ago and write and rewrite my music, but mostly my lyrics. None are perfect but I am trying to get better at it! Best wishes to you!
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