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Hymn to the Light

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 2 total reviews 
Comment by
Jimi Seven
 
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This had some elements that reminded me of Bach, from Brandenburg Concerto in Bm, if I recall correctly. I liked the orchestration, the strings mostly.

I thought the percussion that came and went was a little distracting (for me). And the bass or lower end, maybe it was the instrument selection, was a little strong.

I think if the tempo was slightly increased, the bass and percussion reduced, and the stringed instruments of a higher end, maybe using more violins, I would love it.

I am not suggesting a change to the melodic theme at all. I would have simply liked to have heard a lighter overall feel to this as I really liked the melody.

Keep in mind, this is simply my opinion. Your playing and composition are very well done.

Unlike many reviews I read on this site where reviewers give everything a 5 and don't really critique, I want to offer something of value if I can. I certainly expect the same, even if it results in a lower "score."

But truly nice work!


 Comment Written 18-Sep-2017



reply by the artist on 20-Sep-2017
    Thank you for your review Jimi. I think you nailed it on the head. The bass is a little heavy in some places and almost creates a mushy, heavy feel to the whole piece. I'll need to go back and adjust the balance and correct it. I appreciate your attention to detail, and suggestions.

reply by Jimi Seven on 20-Sep-2017
    You are welcome! I certainly would love to hear it after those minor adjustments. But I definitely like your song. You are quite talented. No way I could write anything with the complexity you do.
Comment by
Frankie(n)
 
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the cover art looks good and the track equally sounds good;good tune;well pleasing to the listening mind


 Comment Written 18-Sep-2017



reply by the artist on 20-Sep-2017
    Thank you very much Frankie for your review.
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