Are you should you didn't forget to put vocals to this? It seemed to trudge along and had no melodic value. With some vocals it could have been meaningful but otherwise after 10 seconds it became a challenge.
Would like to hear a finished version or something else you have done.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2017
reply by the artist on 16-Sep-2017
vocal version will be on 23rd sept
reply by Jimi Seven on 16-Sep-2017
Great as I think this could be quite nice song with the vocals...I look forward to hearing that version as the music on this is good but I think it needs vocals amd I'm sure that was your intention.