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New Generation

song is about being born in a generation of War

 5 total reviews 
Comment by
Jimi Seven
 
 

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You did a great job communicating your message. The melody and instrumentation was quite good. You sang it beautifully. For me the only thing that I thought could be improved was likely outside of your control. I think the final mastering could be improved, i.e. EQ and compression. There were times I struggled to understand the lyrics. But honestly, I really like the song and you performed it very well.


 Comment Written 23-Jul-2017


Comment by
Frankie(n)
 
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  Rank:  2
 

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it sounds good ;I couldn't find anything wrong with it;your voice is your greatest asset;I wish you the best and good luck as well


 Comment Written 30-Nov-2016



reply by the artist on 30-Nov-2016
    Again thank you. This song actually came about from an assignment I was given at school LOL
Comment by
musicman
 
 

Nice job building this one. Your use of dynamics keeps the same four chords from feeling mundane while being repeated thirty three times. Would like to see the lyrics posted as well.


 Comment Written 29-Nov-2016



reply by the artist on 29-Nov-2016
    Thank you for your suggestions. Am planning on adding the lyrics to my posts very soon
Comment by
Jack
 
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You need to add more depth and bass to your voice. It does sound good rhythm and beat.Suggest raising the music the music volume in relation to your voice


 Comment Written 29-Nov-2016



reply by the artist on 29-Nov-2016
    Thank you for your feedback. Will take on board
Comment by
Noah_Ohne
 
Review Stars
  Rank:  19
 

Interesting theme (a generation of war). I guess when you think about it, there will always be wars and there will probably be few if any generations that don't see at least one.

The theme is excellent and your work based on it is very good. Your ideas are well expressed in this piece and the performance is very good. Again, the timbre of your voice is the most noticeable feature of the song and it is very good.



 Comment Written 29-Nov-2016



reply by the artist on 29-Nov-2016
    Again thank you
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