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Children's Song

 5 total reviews 
Comment by
Jimi Seven
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#1 Ranked Reviewer!

This reminds me of something Dylan would have done or folksingers from the 60's.
You are a great storyteller. Nice job on the vocals!

 Comment Written 21-Aug-2017

reply by the artist on 25-Aug-2017
    Thanks again, Jimi; all thank you very much for thinking about me being a storyteller which I truly appreciate that complement.
Comment by
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Very interesting composition. I liked it from the beginning. Original representation of the vocals. Overall very nice work. I personally would prefer some more melody line changes during the song. But it is good in general.

 Comment Written 07-Feb-2017

reply by the artist on 26-Feb-2017
    Thank you, David, for taking your time to listen to the song which I really appreciate your comments.

reply by the artist on 10-Apr-2017
    Thanks for reviewing and sincerely listening
Comment by
Premier Artist
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  Rank:  4

#4 Ranked

Very soulful, I like the clarity in the strings, and the clarity and depth in the mix of the instrumentation sounds very nice. and the lyrics are good as well.

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2016

reply by the artist on 06-Nov-2016
    Thanks for listening and thank you for your advice and for taking your precious time and effort into doing so.
Comment by
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  Rank:  2

#2 Ranked Reviewer

this track also sounds good;I couldn't find anything wrong with it;you've got the skills and the talent to make it happen

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2016

reply by the artist on 03-Nov-2016
    Franklin; after I did the demo I did a remix of this song Thursday morning Pacific standard Time and the words have been changed. Thanks for listening and take care and have a good one
Comment by
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  Rank:  16

The intro is unique and makes a great lead in to the song. The mix here is a bit different than the Story Song Contest version.

The country style is good and this mix sounds a lot more "open". The theme of the song although rather typical for the genre, your perspective in the lyrics and delivery are far from typical and the uniqueness of the delivery will surely attract attention.

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2016

reply by the artist on 03-Nov-2016
    Thank you very much, Noah, for listening to the song which I truly appreciate. I did a remix of the song this morning if you want to listen to it again. I didn't remix this Thursday.
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