I can hear where you're coming from and the concept I think, is very good. The execution is a bit dry and emotionless but the progression is sound. The brass patches are good and sound reasonably authentic.
The vocal might have been a bit more interesting, but the lyrics make a great attempt at telling a story.
Comment Written 14-Jul-2016
reply by the artist on 14-Jul-2016
Thank you so much for your appreciation of what I was trying to do, especially as this song has not met with much approval. Bless you for giving a proper analysis.