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Midsummer Lucy

A song with a little magic

 5 total reviews 
Comment by
Jimi Seven
 
Music Rating
 
 

#1 Ranked Reviewer!

Nice enchanting song that I can picture. Very descriptive. The background could have been brought up to be more clear. I would have a girl sing this.
I think it is quite nice song...with those minor changes it couldbe something very special!


 Comment Written 23-Aug-2017



reply by the artist on 23-Aug-2017
    this was an experiment - I'm not too sure about it. Thanks.
Comment by
Soul Unique
 
Music Rating
 
 

Imaginative. Very different. A little pitchy. I would get a different singer. I gave you a 3 because of your instrumentation. Needs to be mixed as well. Good luck


 Comment Written 07-Jul-2016



reply by the artist on 07-Jul-2016
    thanks.

reply by Soul Unique on 09-Jul-2016
    Very welcome
Comment by
musicman
 
 

The music itself has a nice flow, however the lyrics seem to to be forced into the music. Your vocals need a little help with pitchiness, maybe have a female sing this? Overall not bad.


 Comment Written 06-Jul-2016



reply by the artist on 07-Jul-2016
    thank you - I agree about the pitch, one or two dodgy moments.
Comment by
Noah_Ohne
 
Review Stars
  Rank:  16
 

The theme is good and the concept works well. I thought the lyrics could have been developed a bit more and the focus might have been a bit better. I thought the lyrics were a bit loose. The verses were good, but the choruses didn't seem to fit the rest of the lyrics.

Musically the track was good and a bit reminiscent of the late 60's/early 70's music coming out of the progressive bands like early Aphrodite's Child.

I think the idea is great but could have been developed more lyrically.


 Comment Written 06-Jul-2016



reply by the artist on 06-Jul-2016
    thanks for your comments - I think I agree with you about the lyrics.
Comment by
Frankie(n)
 
Music Rating
 
Review Stars
  Rank:  2
 

#2 Ranked Reviewer

the cover looks beautiful and a delight to watch;you r music also sounds good;beautifully sang with a sweet melody and a soothing voice;good luck as well


 Comment Written 06-Jul-2016



reply by the artist on 06-Jul-2016
    Thank you for your generous comments
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