Nice enchanting song that I can picture. Very descriptive. The background could have been brought up to be more clear. I would have a girl sing this.
I think it is quite nice song...with those minor changes it couldbe something very special!
Comment Written 23-Aug-2017
reply by the artist on 23-Aug-2017
this was an experiment - I'm not too sure about it. Thanks.
The theme is good and the concept works well. I thought the lyrics could have been developed a bit more and the focus might have been a bit better. I thought the lyrics were a bit loose. The verses were good, but the choruses didn't seem to fit the rest of the lyrics.
Musically the track was good and a bit reminiscent of the late 60's/early 70's music coming out of the progressive bands like early Aphrodite's Child.
I think the idea is great but could have been developed more lyrically.
Comment Written 06-Jul-2016
reply by the artist on 06-Jul-2016
thanks for your comments - I think I agree with you about the lyrics.