First off the beat is slapping HARD! I really like the sound...and, not to box you in,I'm a big fan of Detroit hip hop so I know lyrics are a big deal! I think the writing behind the song is worth 4 stars alone but I gave you the 5th because of the production! Can't wait to hear the next one!
Nice track. The melody played by the guitar is very catchy and flows nicely throughout the track. The rap is good, but the story your are telling would be clearer if the lyrics were posted. The vocal delivery is very good and the timbre of the rappers voice cuts through the mix nicely.
The drum beat is consistent although the hi-hat does sound a little strange.