This song is to good with the melody lyric for the vocals to be anything less than the best. You are there but the delivery should come from the heart with your true, warm, sincere, comfortable, smooth, convincing tone. You are almost there practice, practice, practice.
Comment Written 27-Aug-2015
reply by the artist on 28-Aug-2015
Marsstars; I know what you mean by the feeling of the heart that should come through with the vocals and the music and I need to capture that so thank you for the advice. Feeling is 90% of the music. Besides just the practice I need to work harder. Thank you and may the Lord be with you.