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Love Games

Schemes of Love

 11 total reviews 
Comment by
Jimi Seven
 
Music Rating
 
 

#1 Ranked Reviewer!

A beautiful song about life, regrets and memories. Sounds like you lived them..Great lyrics, you sang it well.
Was played well.
One of my favs from you! Keep playing, writing....


 Comment Written 23-Aug-2017



reply by the artist on 25-Aug-2017
    Thank you very much again, Jimi, for taking your time again to read and review the song which I truly appreciate.
    Alex
Comment by
Loyd C. Taylor, Sr.
 
 

Hello fellow artist. I am so glad you posted the lyrics. Nice story telling song. My very best to you in your work. Loyd


 Comment Written 09-Sep-2015



reply by the artist on 09-Sep-2015
    Loyd; Thanks so much my friend for listening to my song and for reviewing it also.
    Alex

reply by Loyd C. Taylor, Sr. on 10-Sep-2015
    My pleasure, Loyd
Comment by
Eric Grow
 
 

Nice music arrangement and lyrics. I really enjoy easy listening feel to the song. Great vocals! The song really brings me back in time.


 Comment Written 30-Aug-2015



reply by the artist on 09-Sep-2015
    Eric; thank you so much my friend for listening and reviewing my song and for taking your precious time and effort into doing so.
    Alex
Comment by
Noah_Ohne
 
Review Stars
  Rank:  16
 

Very good composition. The acoustic guitar blends well with the lush textures supporting it. The melody line for the lead vocal is very good and the voice itself seems to help tell the story.

I would devote a little more attention to the vocals so as not to stray off key.


 Comment Written 30-Aug-2015



reply by the artist on 09-Sep-2015
    Noah; thank you for your explicit and welcoming comments which I truly appreciate wholeheartedly along with your reviewing and listening to my song.
    Alex
Comment by
Wallace
Premier Artist
 
Music Rating
 
 

I liked the guitar work and the other string effects and percussion. The lyrics were effective and the voice, I think using reverb, was confident in the way you got them across. Some slight blurring effect from time to time which was a pity. It's a good song. Good luck in the contest.


 Comment Written 29-Aug-2015



reply by the artist on 29-Aug-2015
    Wallace; thank you for taking your precious time and effort in evaluating my song which I truly appreciate wholeheartedly and for wishing me good luck.
Comment by
kellen
 
 

Very pretty song. The recording quality is a little muffled and rough. Nice lyrics. The violin is a nice addition. Good job.


 Comment Written 28-Aug-2015



reply by the artist on 29-Aug-2015
    Kellen; thank you so much for listening into reviewing my song which I truly appreciate wholeheartedly.
Comment by
michaelross
 
 

I liked the melody to this song very much.Good job on your composition.One comment,try and watch your pitch in the changes.I have the same problem when changes are made in the chorus.


 Comment Written 28-Aug-2015



reply by the artist on 29-Aug-2015
    Michaelross; thank you for taking your precious time and effort into reading and listening to my song.
Comment by
Moustro
 
 

Things like staying on key and keeping in rhythm with the song are important to how the audience will interpret your performance. As you continue to write, you'll continue to improve. Thanks for sharing your music!

This rating does not count towards story rating or artist rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.


 Comment Written 28-Aug-2015



reply by the artist on 29-Aug-2015
    Moustro; thank you for listening to the song and reviewing it accordingly. And I feel better that you are a newly acquired artist hear it fan music and good luck in your future endeavors.
Comment by
ManIn6
 
Music Rating
 
 

Keep it up. Sometimes it takes time to get it just right.
Lots of good elements, but just need some help tying it all together.


 Comment Written 28-Aug-2015



reply by the artist on 28-Aug-2015
    Manin6; Thank you for taking your precious time and effort into listening and reading my work which I truly appreciate wholeheartedly. Being just a demo I know what you mean by getting it just right. Thanks again
Comment by
Frankie(n)
 
Music Rating
 
Review Stars
  Rank:  2
 

#2 Ranked Reviewer

the cover art looks good and bright and beautiful;your musical composition has got what it takes to appeal to the general public;keep it up and good luck as well

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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.


 Comment Written 28-Aug-2015



reply by the artist on 28-Aug-2015
    Frankie(n); thank you for taking your precious time and effort into listening to my work which I truly appreciate wholeheartedly and for wishing me good luck.
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