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They Walked.....

A protest at the suffering of migrants in Europe

 8 total reviews 
Comment by
Jimi Seven
 
Music Rating
 
 

#1 Ranked Reviewer!

I loved your narrative, you are quite talented writer....but I must say thyat this not really a song it is an audio book type narrative. The difference to me is that it has no melody; it is not rap.

I think it has its place but maybe in the book section.

Just my opinion. As a songwriter all of things songwriters judge songs on like tempo, melody, music, arrangement --the only thing that can be judged here are your lyrics...but on an audio book your narration is very good.


 Comment Written 27-Jul-2017



reply by the artist on 29-Jul-2017
    Thanks for your comments. I appreciate you taking the time.
Comment by
AugustWillDecay
 
 

This is a beautiful piece. I really like your lyric writing style and the instrumentation is really nice and relaxing to listen to. I like your choice to almost "read" the lyrics"

-august will decay
9-25-2015


 Comment Written 25-Sep-2015



reply by the artist on 26-Sep-2015
    thanks. I was responding to the plight of so many desperate peopled. I composed the music and lyricsd - my wife performed them.
Comment by
Loyd C. Taylor, Sr.
 
 

Hello Wallace. This was a very interesting story and story line. When you post, the software doesn't change the apostrophes, so you may need to go back and edit your words. I enjoyed your music and song, my best to you. Loyd


 Comment Written 04-Sep-2015



reply by the artist on 04-Sep-2015
    Thanks for that - I definitely need to check the text. Thanks for the 'heads up'.

reply by Loyd C. Taylor, Sr. on 06-Sep-2015
    my pleasure, loyd
Comment by
samasoni
 
Music Rating
 
 

What a wonderful project. Nice narration over music. You know- this would make a wonderful road show or a play. See if you can do a whole album with songs just like this one, and with the correct theme you might be on to something here pal. Good creative work- awesome idea!


 Comment Written 23-Aug-2015



reply by the artist on 24-Aug-2015
    Thanks for your appreciation - the project came from the heart
Comment by
John David Coupland
Premier Artist
 
Music Rating
 
 

A good piece of poetry and an imaginative use of the music. Perhaps the intro is a tad too long but it does invoke the weariness these folks must feel. All the best in the competition.

John


 Comment Written 23-Aug-2015



reply by the artist on 23-Aug-2015
    Thank you for your appreciation. The opening was meant to signify aggression, war etc. The rest is their exodus and disappointment. You may well be right that I overdid it a little.
Comment by
Frankie(n)
 
Music Rating
 
Review Stars
  Rank:  2
 

#2 Ranked Reviewer

the cover art looks beautiful;the instrumentation was well played and the rhythm sounds good;I wasn't too familiar with your style of melody and it was hard for it to touch me as I couldn't feel ant emotions or feel attached with it;good luck though


 Comment Written 22-Aug-2015



reply by the artist on 22-Aug-2015
    Thank you for your thoughts-the words were intended to be spoken rather than sung, but not rhythmically like a Rap.
Comment by
Kakalaki Kid
 
 

Really love the lyrics the most in this piece. The composition was cool with the drums and flute intro, love it. Then increasing and yet slow temporizing into a nice smooth reading voice. i love poetry of a musical class, but so many just don't bloody get it.. Cheers love, hope you are looking to grow, if so please stay in contact. Can I be totally honest, I love the fact that you don't let them off the hook by making this short simply because it is different. I crave difference.


 Comment Written 21-Aug-2015



reply by the artist on 22-Aug-2015
    Thank you for your appreciation
Comment by
Noah_Ohne
 
Review Stars
  Rank:  16
 

I love the concept. The hollow flute is a nice touch. I think the story that's being told is excellent and holds my interest. The choral vocal harmonies also add a nice texture to the song.

I think it needs work in the mix.


 Comment Written 21-Aug-2015



reply by the artist on 22-Aug-2015
    thank you for your appreciation
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