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Reviews from
Without You

Acoustic Rock (Recorded Live in Monterey Calif.)

 10 total reviews 
Comment by
Little Ricky
 
Music Rating
 
 

I listened to it twice to give the correct review the song grew on me more towards the end could picture Niel Diamond singing this.
The recording was not brilliant which I always have a battle with myself ,liked the harmonica cool .


 Comment Written 09-Oct-2015



reply by the artist on 10-Oct-2015
    Little Ricky; thank you so much for listening to my song and reviewing it also which I truly appreciate wholeheartedly.
Comment by
Noah_Ohne
 
Review Stars
  Rank:  16
 

I like the chord progression, you did some really nice things in that. The melody for the vocals is good and fits the progression well. The effect on the vocal made it a little hard to understand all of what was being sung. The harmonica was a nice touch.

Good track, just needs a little cleaning up.


 Comment Written 01-Oct-2015



reply by the artist on 10-Oct-2015
    Noah; thank you for listening and reviewing my song which I truly appreciate all heartedly.
Comment by
Loyd C. Taylor, Sr.
 
 

Hello good friend. I enjoyed your tune, the rhythm. I am glad you posted the lyrics, to this sad, romantic song. You are giving a warning to her,, will she listen?
My best to you. Loyd


 Comment Written 30-Sep-2015



reply by the artist on 10-Oct-2015
    Loyd; Thank you so kindly my friend for reviewing and listening to my song which I truly appreciate wholeheartedly.

reply by Loyd C. Taylor, Sr. on 12-Oct-2015
    My pleasure, Loyd
Comment by
Wallace
Premier Artist
 
Music Rating
 
 

Nice guitar and harmonica opening added to by strings.
I enjoyed the song, but felt the vocals were hindered by the voice effect you used. The lyrics were good too. Good luck in the competition.


 Comment Written 30-Sep-2015



reply by the artist on 10-Oct-2015
    Wallace; thank you so kindly my friend from listening and reviewing my song which I truly appreciate wholeheartedly.
Comment by
60sguru
 
 

With guitar sounding like parts of aqualung jethero Tull
And vocals reminisant of Hurricane smith don't let it die
It works and lyrics when you're lonely and scared the whole song works on all levels well done look forward to your next one


 Comment Written 29-Sep-2015



reply by the artist on 10-Oct-2015
    Thank you so kindly my dearest friend for listening and reviewing my song which I truly appreciate all heartedly and for taking your precious time and effort into doing so.
Comment by
ThePerfectBalance
 
 

I like the lyrics very much, a good message of the love that's being lost. The guitars sounds good, and the harmonies seem to be so, too. The vocal effect reminds me Ozzy Osbourne a bit. Don't think it is suitable for this song though.


 Comment Written 29-Sep-2015



reply by the artist on 10-Oct-2015
    ThePerfectBalance; Thank you so kindly my friend for reading and listening to my song which I truly appreciate wholeheartedly.
Comment by
Didilove
 
 

The lyrics are amazing. the tone is great the melody is really great. this voice is great. I would listen to this song again. I give it a five star cause it was great.


 Comment Written 28-Sep-2015



reply by the artist on 28-Sep-2015
    Didlove; Thank you for listening to my song which I truly appreciate wholeheartedly.
Comment by
teek
 
 

It's a bit hard to give "feedback" to a professional recording artist , but I think the vocals need tweaking , it's obviously a very personal song so thanks for sharing ,


 Comment Written 26-Jul-2015



reply by the artist on 27-Jul-2015
    Teek; Thank you so kindly for listening and reviewing my work and my Presonus music studio I'm still learning how to use.
Comment by
Frankie(n)
 
Music Rating
 
Review Stars
  Rank:  2
 

#2 Ranked Reviewer

It sounds good and came out nice and clear;the instrumentation is well played with a good rhythm to match;however,the way you sang it could be better if it becomes livelier


 Comment Written 21-Jul-2015



reply by the artist on 23-Jul-2015
    Frankie(n); thank you so kindly for listening to my music which I truly appreciate wholeheartedly and especially for taking your precious time and effort in writing a review.
Comment by
Kakalaki Kid
 
 

Mann I was going to give this a 3 but I just couldn't mate. I can truly hear what you're trying to pull off and I think if had better sound quality and more powerful overlays to pull out the dips in the cord play and to draw out the harmonics with the harmonica droing in surprises as it does.. Very nice with that by the way. however I must say that you need to play and sing with a lot more confidence and push for that control of sound. Know what, how and when you want a note and verse to ride. Then just let it flow. the better you get at this, then you will soon after achieve the art of free flow. Your journey is going to be a fun one and yet trying. Remember those who truly want to achieve at this art, must truly accept it as an art. An an art of and to master that art within themselves, which shall show thru share, the share with others of your true embrace. Feel the talent mate and hear the sounds of your melody. :}


 Comment Written 21-Jul-2015



reply by the artist on 21-Jul-2015
    Kid; your message in your review I will hold dear for a long time. You truly know what you're talking about. I thank you so much for listening to my music and offering your advice which is given wholeheartedly.
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