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it's gonna be a long time from now

R & B Reggae

 7 total reviews 
Comment by
Jimi Seven
 
Music Rating
 
 

#1 Ranked Reviewer!

Liked the beat to the song...I do think the recording quality was not up to par but the performance was fine. You did a good on vocals. The lyrics were fine and the message was a good one.


 Comment Written 23-Aug-2017



reply by the artist on 25-Aug-2017
    Thank you, Jimi; for being honest with your review which is very important to me and thank you for doing so which I truly appreciate.
    Alex
Comment by
Noah_Ohne
 
Review Stars
  Rank:  16
 

Nice rock groove. I like the acoustic guitar out front in a rocky track. The vocal melody is good, however I do wish the lyrics were posted. The recording is fair, but I think a bit of compression and a better mix would help the impact of the track a lot. Bring the vocals up and brighten the guitars a bit and it will sound a lot better.

Good song.


 Comment Written 13-Nov-2015



reply by the artist on 14-Nov-2015
    Noah; thank you so much for listening to my song and reviewing it also. according to my computer the lyrics were posted??
    thanks again and God bless and thanks for your suggestions they will help

reply by Noah_Ohne on 15-Nov-2015
    Sorry, the mistake on the lyrics comment was my error. I did go back to take a look and you are absolutely right my friend, they are indeed there.

    I will pay greater attention in the future.

    Noah Ohne
Comment by
2USband
 
 

This is in fact a good and progressive melody, but if this recording was done in an "up to date" studio 2015, I really hope that the sound coming through my speakers is ment to be this way. Muffled and kind of hidden away. I did not get much of an R&B feeling I must admit, but on the other hand that is not my strongpoint in music either... On the upside. The lyrics are great, the voice is compelling, and I wish you luck in the contest :-) Cheers.


 Comment Written 13-Nov-2015



reply by the artist on 14-Nov-2015
    2USband; thank you so much my friends for reading and listening to my song and for wishing me good luck in the contest which I truly appreciate wholeheartedly. try to remix it in my studio to see if it'll come out better. thanks again
Comment by
Wallace
Premier Artist
 
Music Rating
 
 

Nice accompaniment appropriate to the genre of this song. The lyrics have a good message, giving a voice to the unnoticed in the street. Good vocal skills, really clear diction.


 Comment Written 13-Jun-2015



reply by the artist on 13-Jun-2015
    Wallace; thank you so kindly for taking your precious time and effort into listening and reviewing my work which I truly appreciate wholeheartedly.
Comment by
marsstars
 
 

You definitely got the frame for a dynamic song more confidences in your vocals would ensure the listeners that you feel the song and the ambiance of your unique sound would persuade a happy groove. Do what you do and make the listener do it too.


 Comment Written 13-Jun-2015



reply by the artist on 13-Jun-2015
    Marsstars; Thank you so kindly for reviewing and listening to my song which I truly appreciate wholeheartedly.
Comment by
Mockmusic
 
 

Recording is not the best- sound is wavering The song itself is very - in the pocket - of the style indicated. Lyrics paint a good story. I'd shorten it a bit and also add a key change , bridge change shift.


 Comment Written 12-Jun-2015



reply by the artist on 13-Jun-2015
    Mockmusic; Thank you so kindly for listening and the viewing of my song which I truly appreciate wholeheartedly.
Comment by
Frankie(n)
 
Music Rating
 
Review Stars
  Rank:  2
 

#2 Ranked Reviewer

It really sounds good;it has a soulful vibe ;well sang and produced with good instrumentation and I believe that it might appeal to the general public;good luck as well


 Comment Written 12-Jun-2015



reply by the artist on 13-Jun-2015
    Frankie(n); thank you so kindly my friend for listening and reviewing of my song which I truly appreciate wholeheartedly.
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