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When My Woman Makes Love To Me

Sultry R&B Song

 7 total reviews 
Comment by
Jimi Seven
 
 

#1 Ranked Reviewer!

You are a superb songwriter and performer.

Your lyrics and song construction reflect someone who has done this for a while and know how to write and perform.

Another great song from you!


 Comment Written 25-Aug-2017


Comment by
Noah_Ohne
 
Review Stars
  Rank:  19
 

Excellent sax sound. The vocal is great and the timbre of the vocalist fits perfectly in the mix. The lyrics are really good and tell a story well. The sax solo is perfect, is it real sax or a synth?

Great work.


 Comment Written 20-Dec-2015



reply by the artist on 20-Dec-2015
    Hi Noah,

    The sax is live. There are no synths or midis on this cut ... everything is live. We have a small studio in our house.

    I really like this song, but it has to be for the right crowd. It's a little suggestive (the lyric), so I do not perform it or post just anywhere. Nut it is one of y favorite songs to sing.

    I appreciate your kind words! ...

    Alan
Comment by
Loyd C. Taylor, Sr.
 
 

Hello singer friend. A very smooth, relaxing and passion filled song. I enjoyed the music and glad you posted the lyrics. My best to you in the contest. Loyd


 Comment Written 16-Apr-2015



reply by the artist on 26-Apr-2015
    Hi Loyd ...

    Please forgive the tardiness of my reply. But our oldest son passed away last month (49 years old). He lived out of state. We've been tied with the affairs of his estate, plus we are involved in another legal matter that requires us to drive three states away. I've simply been too busy, and emotionally distraught, to log onto the site in over a month.

    I appreciate the kind words. Thank you so very much! Best to you ...

    Alan

reply by the artist on 26-Apr-2015
    Hi Loyd ...

    Please forgive the tardiness of my reply. But our oldest son passed away last month (49 years old). He lived out of state. We've been tied with the affairs of his estate, plus we are involved in another legal matter that requires us to drive three states away. I've simply been too busy, and emotionally distraught, to log onto the site in over a month.

    I appreciate the kind words. Thank you so very much! Best to you ...

    Alan

reply by Loyd C. Taylor, Sr. on 28-Apr-2015
    Hi friend. It's quiet alright. I am sorry for your loss.
    I will say a prayer for you and will trust for you to have wisdom as you move forward. Thanks for your reply.
Comment by
Edward Schaffer
 
 

This is nice R&B/Smooth Jazz. But the lyrics leave little to the imagination. LOL I guess it is a matter of style. Overall it is well done, and vocals, and background performances are all very good.


 Comment Written 21-Feb-2015



reply by the artist on 23-Feb-2015
    Hello!

    I am delighted with your review for two reasons. First, I appreciate the kind words and appreciation you have for the song. Second, it came across to you, the listener, exactly as I had hoped it would. It was intended to be suggestive and leave plenty of room for imagination. I guess you could say, I'll p,ant the seed but allow the listener to let it flourish as he or she sees fit.

    Thank you again! Wishing you well,

    Alan
Comment by
Frankie(n)
 
Music Rating
 
Review Stars
  Rank:  2
 

#2 Ranked Reviewer

wow! the cover art has a great appeal for people to want to listen to your track and they wont be disappointed because your music also sounds good;good luck as well


 Comment Written 21-Feb-2015



reply by the artist on 23-Feb-2015
    Hello ...

    Thank you very much for the wonderful review. I'm delighted you enjoyed the song ... and the cover art! Wishing you the very best ...
Comment by
60sguru
 
 

Captures the 80s movies to a tea deep meaning full sound and lyrics perfect for a tv theme late at night great effort well done


 Comment Written 20-Feb-2015



reply by the artist on 20-Feb-2015
    Thank you very much! I appreciate those kind words! Will be over to listen to you in a while. See ya then ...

Comment by
Dustybones
 
 

Very silky smooth sounding song, plus it's a lover's dance. Your voice is cool ans has enough rasp to take the chill off of a cool evening.


 Comment Written 20-Feb-2015



reply by the artist on 20-Feb-2015
    You are much too kind, bit I think I can deal with it! Wishing you the very best ...
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