Very haunting intro. The female voice is very nice. The music is very interesting and the slightly jazzy groove is cool. I think this has a lot of commercial appeal and would probably be well suited to a movie soundtrack.
Now I'm digging this here, fresh original & tricky. its so hypnotic and yet it has that killer groove that just makes you knod your own self to sleep. I love that style your riding with your lyrics. You would have sounded killer on this track I call Murder That. Not as crude as the name leads on to be. You have a good ear for your style. I would take this and mater this style and pro'FECT that technique. This song could be your break out song. Especially if that's all you, with no royalty payout. You rode this song out.. % stars to me mate.