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Yes I Do

A Smooth R&B Love Song In The Style Of Al Green

 6 total reviews 
Comment by
Jimi Seven
 
Music Rating
 
 

#1 Ranked Reviewer!

Beautiful love song. I liked the words. It just flows so easily, peacefully...but with an understated passion.

You did a good job on the vocals, instruments.

Do you play all the instruments?

Great arrangement. Liked the solo!


 Comment Written 25-Aug-2017


Comment by
2euce B.I.G.A.L.O
 
 

Very nice and it caught me off guard just a little bit. You're a great songwriter and I could probably learn a few things from you. I really enjoyed the song.


 Comment Written 20-Mar-2016



reply by the artist on 30-Jul-2016
    Hi ...

    Please forgive my very late reply. I've been going through chemo treatments for cancer and had emergency surgery. I've felt pretty good the past several days, so I;m back on the site.

    Thank you so much for your encouraging review. I apprecviate the kind words very much.

    Wishing you the very best ...

    Alan
Comment by
Noah_Ohne
 
Review Stars
  Rank:  16
 

Great jazzy feel and the chord progressions are very smooth and flow well. The lyrics are very good and the vocals are pleasing to listen to. The recording quality is great also. I really like the electric piano sound and the sax is killer.


 Comment Written 20-Dec-2015



reply by the artist on 20-Dec-2015
    Hi Again, My Friend!

    This is one of y favorite songs I've written. Although the sax was planned all along, the electric piano was a last minute decision. I'm delighted you feel it was a good choice! Thanks again ...
Comment by
Edward Schaffer
 
 

Work on those vocals before you try to re-record this. The playing is decent and the lyrics are OK but the vocals are very distracting, and they definitely need some work


 Comment Written 05-Dec-2014



reply by the artist on 05-Dec-2014
    Edward,

    Thanks for the review and your observations. I guess the opinion on the quality of the vocals will vary from one person to another. You weren't that impressed, yet another reviewer that the vocal was great.

    Just so you know, I never take constructive criticism personally. It's all part of the learning/improving process. So I am not offended in the least. Yours is simply an honest opinion of how it struck you.

    I seriously doubt the vocals will get any better. I'm almost 70 years old. Vocal abilities to decline at advanced ages rather then improve ... just part of the natural maturation process!

    Thanks again for the listen and your comments. Best to you ...

reply by the artist on 05-Dec-2014
    Edward,

    Thanks for the review and your observations. I guess the opinion on the quality of the vocals will vary from one person to another. You weren't that impressed, yet another reviewer that the vocal was great.

    Just so you know, I never take constructive criticism personally. It's all part of the learning/improving process. So I am not offended in the least. Yours is simply an honest opinion of how it struck you.

    I seriously doubt the vocals will get any better. I'm almost 70 years old. Vocal abilities to decline at advanced ages rather then improve ... just part of the natural maturation process!

    Thanks again for the listen and your comments. Best to you ...
Comment by
Frankie(n)
 
Music Rating
 
Review Stars
  Rank:  2
 

#2 Ranked Reviewer

the cover art has a great potential to appeal to people and urge them to listen to your track and they wont be disappointed because the music equally sounds good;good luck as well


 Comment Written 05-Dec-2014



reply by the artist on 05-Dec-2014
    Hi Frankie ...

    Thank you for taking a few minutes of your valuable time to give this a listen and for your kind review. I am delighted you enjoyed it. Thanks for letting me know! I appreciate your kind words! Best to you ...

reply by the artist on 05-Dec-2014
    Hi Frankie ...

    Thank you for taking a few minutes of your valuable time to give this a listen and for your kind review. I am delighted you enjoyed it. Thanks for letting me know! I appreciate your kind words! Best to you ...
Comment by
Jun Naotsuka
 
 

Good intro, good atmosphere, and then here it is, a great vocal. I like the saxophone in the middle. And a real nice ending. Nothing to complain about. Six stars from me!


 Comment Written 05-Dec-2014



reply by the artist on 05-Dec-2014
    Jun ...

    Thank you so much for the listen and your extremely kind review. I am delighted you enjoyed it. I'm getting up in years and the voice isn't as good as it once was. So I appreciate your kind words about that.

    Wishing you well ...

reply by the artist on 05-Dec-2014
    Jun ...

    Thank you so much for the listen and your extremely kind review. I am delighted you enjoyed it. I'm getting up in years and the voice isn't as good as it once was. So I appreciate your kind words about that.

    Wishing you well ...
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