I liked the way you brought the song in...the strings were very good. It sounded like there were some notes off a little bit for some reason.
THis one did not feel complete.
But certainly areas I liked.
Comment Written 25-Aug-2017
reply by the artist on 25-Aug-2017
This was an idea that did not quite work out, I'm afraid. It was meant to have a jazzy feel.
Good thing about this song is how symphonic it sounds. Some nice instrumentation here and there. You used some dissonant sounding extended notes that just don't work in the overall context of this music. It sounds mostly classical in style, but the percussion you used sounds like a drum set for popular music, and they just did not really work together. If you have written purely classical sounding music, I would love to listen.
Comment Written 13-Nov-2014
reply by the artist on 13-Nov-2014
Thanks for your response - try my 'In two Worlds' or 'Gardens of the Soul.
From the sound of things lonely is stressful, which I guess makes sense. But some of your stress makes your song hard to listen to. Harmony is pedestrian, melody is as well. I appreciate the effort, but it doesn't work for me
Comment Written 10-Nov-2014
reply by the artist on 11-Nov-2014
Yea, I agree about the harmony - thanks for the review.