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Cruel World

A short song I made last year. Garageband on mac.

 5 total reviews 
Comment by
Noah_Ohne
 
Review Stars
  Rank:  16
 

Really nice approach and a great feel.

The vocal is excellent and the singer has a really nice timbre. Your voice is very memorable and identifiable witch from my perspective is an excellent trait.

The music is well written and has a somewhat unique style. Very nice! Although there are few instruments in the composition, it's not really missed much because the vocal fills the mix nicely. The addition of the very resonant low end synth after the chorus towards the end is nice and very noticed.

The recording is good and the mix has a great sound. Very well done.


 Comment Written 13-Mar-2016


Comment by
Ray Brookes
 
 

G'day. Yeah, I like this one too! Nice intro and great vocals, mister. Sounds like you have a good handle on that Garageband; making some good stuff as what I have heard so far. Only one thing ... I am a bit of a lyricist so could you post the lyrics. Good strong backing track and a well thought out song. Love to hear this with a real full band. Well done; Keep writing.


 Comment Written 24-Dec-2013


Comment by
Ionut Mirel Udrea
 
Review Stars
 
 

Nice left hand piano! The sound is good and the arrangements well done! The composition is nice too. If you permit me a sugestion: I'll do this song less electronic! That's just an opinion. Anyway the song is nice like this too! Congratulations!


 Comment Written 23-Dec-2013


Comment by
twisty
 
 

Quite a bluesy track actually. i liked the vocal style. good singing .the verses are good. what it lacks is a chorus the verses are the best part. it sounds good but it could be great if you could do some kind of hook or chorus after the verse.
its too good to just leave as it is. would be my view.
good luck


 Comment Written 23-Dec-2013



reply by the artist on 23-Dec-2013
    That is a good call. Thank you so much for your feedback! I will begin writing a chorus. Glad to know its worthy to keep working on! Have a wonderful day!
Comment by
RonD
 
 

Very 80s vibe to this. Nice sound on the vocals. Adequate mix, though I think an electronic bass line would improve the overall sound.


 Comment Written 23-Dec-2013



reply by the artist on 23-Dec-2013
    Ron! For some reason I actually had not thought of adding one. I will look into it right away. That is great advice! Thank you very much!
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