sounds very experimental guitar sounds out of tune or something to me or wrong effects used
The beat was good but the track didn't progress that much from its original state. i liked the style though id like to hear a modified version
A lot of crackling noise at the start (fire). Did you intend this? The rhythm was pleasing enough but mostly chord progressions. Not enough of a melody and structure to hold the attention of the listeners. The voice was cool but I could not make out what was being said.