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Deterioration Blues (Falling into

A bit of a cross over

 3 total reviews 
Comment by
Kerri Powles
 
Review Stars
  Rank:  6
 

I'm guessing the slightly un-tuned guitars were a deliberate move on your part to create the feeling of deterioration? Whether you intended it or not it works quite well for this piece. The lyrics need some work I'm afraid as there's not quite enough there to grab my attention. Again I would say that your music has got the potential to be aimed at a 'Contemporary' film genre. You do need to work on the lyrics though.


 Comment Written 05-Nov-2013


Comment by
Chef Beats
 
Music Rating
 
 

This track has the potential to be something but definitely needs some cleaning up and I would have also like more lyrics. Also some of the guitar parts need some work.


 Comment Written 29-Oct-2013


Comment by
dbsoares
 
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Good concept. Creates the idea of deteirioation. You could have added a few more lyrics. Guitars slightly de-detuned unless you wanted it that way. I think this tune could be much more. Best wishes.


 Comment Written 28-Oct-2013


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