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for your love

my second recording

 3 total reviews 
Comment by
Noah_Ohne
 
Review Stars
  Rank:  16
 

Great progression. The vocals are excellent and the vocal delivery is superb. The usage of Autotune in this case is very complimentary to the vocal. The lyrics should have been posted, they sound really good.

The progression is very good and the changes flow really well.

Excellent work


 Comment Written 17-Feb-2016


Comment by
WalkingHorse
 
Music Rating
  Rank:  222 (+1)
 

Your music was entertaining. I don't generally listen too much R&B anymore but my exwife was an R&B singer so I familiar with the genre. I would like to make some recording and composition comments, so understand that I am interested in construction, not fire. I notice good effects in the mix but the fade at the end of the song was a little abrupt. I would stretch that out a bit and give it a smooth closing that a fine such a piece of music deserves. Your backups are mixed a little soft (perhaps your were looking to pronounce the lead) but a little more boost would be better for contrast in the melody. In terms of the composition, technicals for instruments are fine, but in some parts it seemed that the lyrics might have too many words...try the vocal track again and omit unnecessary words to increase stylization and you might have a little fun with it. This is just a thought, as less words sometimes say more. If you don't like it, write me and tell me I don't know what I'm talking about, but I think you will love it! Otherwise, I see a song that is really good on the verge of being spectacular.


 Comment Written 24-Oct-2013



reply by the artist on 12-Nov-2013
    thanks very much i see some of the area you touched i was also not satisfied with the end and other area like you rightly mentioned.i told the producer that i am not satisfied.i want a remix of the song and when i and done,i will delete this and post the new one.you are indeed good and plain.big up to you.thanks.infact you do know what you are talking about and please whenever you see my track,please do review it yours is the best review so professional and i want to grow i am new in the game.
Comment by
Frankie(n)
 
Music Rating
 
Review Stars
  Rank:  2
 

#2 Ranked Reviewer

you did great and it sounds good;go ahead and give it your best shot and i believe that it might appeal to the general public


 Comment Written 24-Oct-2013



reply by the artist on 24-Oct-2013
    thanks man you really light me up.i have faith as well that the general public will like it and also point out where or areas i need improvement.thanks.
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