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atmosphere by hamxonic jive

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 15 total reviews 
Comment by
kristanyorkmusic
 
Music Rating
 
 

I really love the sound of the guitar with the keys, and maybe I hear some strings in there too? It's a very quality song, well produced, and the harmonies are awesome. I thought the lyrics could have been a little bit more original; I just feel that I've heard this song before. Other than that it was great. Nice job.


 Comment Written 03-Oct-2013



reply by the artist on 05-Oct-2013
    Thank you bro ..actually they are original but I ll come out with new original songs ..already working on them
Comment by
songbyrd
 
 

Nice lyrics, nice music, put together well. Enjoyed listening. Low male vocal could be out front just a little bit. Overall, very nice.


 Comment Written 03-Oct-2013



reply by the artist on 05-Oct-2013
    Thank you man ..will take it to consideration
Comment by
Ishan111
 
 

Hamzah! Good song, dude! Love the simplicity of the instrumentation and good lyrics too. The only minor criticism I would give you is that in the chorus sections when you say "waiting", it sounds like you run out of breath when the listener is anticipating you to hold that note for just a bit longer. Well, that's just my opinion anyway, I'm sure some others would disagree with it.


 Comment Written 03-Oct-2013



reply by the artist on 05-Oct-2013
    Hahaha thanks ishan no actually it's good that you throw in suggestions it would help lot ..and you to keep posting stuff so that i would listen and help you to grow.
Comment by
Scott Harvey
 
Review Stars
 
 

Brilliant again! I still long to here some percussion (other than the strumming of the guitar) to add a little extra as the song progresses, but this is hard to criticize. The lyrics are excellent. Your vocals show a ton of emotion (I'm jealous). Really beautiful.


 Comment Written 02-Oct-2013



reply by the artist on 05-Oct-2013
    Hahaha thanks scott ..will try to do better songs next time
Comment by
Kerri Powles
 
Review Stars
  Rank:  6
 

This is a really good song. Very well instrumentally structured and your lyrics were excellent. You have a really lovely voice. Thank you for sharing and keep up the good work.

Best wishes... Kerri

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 Comment Written 02-Oct-2013



reply by the artist on 02-Oct-2013
    thank you Kerri ..i will be sure to upload more songs along the way..=)


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