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atmosphere by hamxonic jive

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 15 total reviews 
Comment by
Jimi Seven
 
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#1 Ranked Reviewer!

Duuudeee, you're a really good song writer! Love the melodies you come up with and the lyrics. Whoever listens to them can tell that they're very personal to you and that it's a reflection of what you feel.

Hope you make it big someday but until then, keep pushing yourself...it'll be completely worth it! :)


 Comment Written 04-Oct-2017


Comment by
Dustybones
 
 

Good song with a pleasant Indigo Girls sound going on here. I did notice a glitch at 2:14 where you must have change at the end of a measure. Very nice!


 Comment Written 06-Jan-2014


Comment by
Lindsay Rae Alward
 
 

Great song overall. Not a big fan of the synth sound. Piano in the background would be awesome. Keep up the great work!


 Comment Written 09-Oct-2013


Comment by
RonD
 
 

Yes very good. Good voice and nice harmonies and I like the subtle reverb on the voice. I felt it would have been better without the background keyboard. Better with just guitar IMHO, but that is just a minor criticism. Keep up the good work.


 Comment Written 09-Oct-2013


Comment by
dbsoares
 
Review Stars
 
 

Very contemporary sound. May be the best track I have heard on FanMusic. It looks all good for you. :-)


 Comment Written 08-Oct-2013


Comment by
djw63
 
 

Beautiful lyrics I love it one of the best songs I've herd on here I love it everything perfect your a great singer best voice I've heard hope to hear a lot more from you


 Comment Written 05-Oct-2013



reply by the artist on 05-Oct-2013
    Thank you bro.. It's great to know somebody cares ..and will do wont let you down

reply by djw63 on 05-Oct-2013
    your welcome
Comment by
Frankie(n)
 
Music Rating
 
Review Stars
  Rank:  2
 

#2 Ranked Reviewer

doing it with passion would take you far if you continue to take it to the top;it sounds good and i believe that the general public might appreciate it


 Comment Written 04-Oct-2013



reply by the artist on 05-Oct-2013
    Thank you bro.. It's great to know somebody cares ..and will do wont let you down
Comment by
Dreams of melodies
 
 

beautiful Song, Very good composing, The voice is very nice,
trained and Talent, Hoping for you all the best.
Regards
Dreams Of Melodies


 Comment Written 04-Oct-2013



reply by the artist on 05-Oct-2013
    Thank you so much but will have to improve on it though ..going to do just that ..
Comment by
p.jarqs music band
 
Music Rating
 
 

the song is nice; I like the lyrics and the vocal is clear. It is a nice job keep it up. and try to do more than this one.


 Comment Written 03-Oct-2013



reply by the artist on 05-Oct-2013
    Thank you bro.. It's great to know somebody cares ..and will do wont let you down
Comment by
JamesCarlson
 
Music Rating
  Rank:  184 (+1)
 

The vocals need a little more work. I think you need a little more melody in the song other than just the guitar and the weird ambiance in the background. I like the lyrics for the most part.

This rating does not count towards story rating or artist rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.


 Comment Written 03-Oct-2013



reply by the artist on 05-Oct-2013
    Thank you bro..I respect criticism it helps me to grow ..will improve on it
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