Duuudeee, you're a really good song writer! Love the melodies you come up with and the lyrics. Whoever listens to them can tell that they're very personal to you and that it's a reflection of what you feel.
Hope you make it big someday but until then, keep pushing yourself...it'll be completely worth it! :)
Yes very good. Good voice and nice harmonies and I like the subtle reverb on the voice. I felt it would have been better without the background keyboard. Better with just guitar IMHO, but that is just a minor criticism. Keep up the good work.