You are a wonderful singer! The feel is good. I hear the passion but if you want this song to go somewhere you'll need to polish up the lyrics a bit. I think you get attached to some lines that just don't do it. We all do that. I know I do. But there comes a point where if your metaphor isn't working then it needs to be taken out. Like: I don't see the connection between "ship wrecks on the sea" and dancin' unless it means your're rockin' but I don't think it is. Plus: ship wrecks ON the sea. Aren't they usually either at the bottom of the sea or smashed against a shore somewhere? I also think you need better mixing on your voice. A tiny autotune here and there and less bursts of air on opening lines. Great voice tho.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2013
reply by the artist on 24-Oct-2013
thanks for your comments, it is too late for me to change the songs as they are playing on commercial radio but i will have a look at them again.
this is beautiful..I really enjoyed the entire song..your vocals, the lyrics and the music. Keep up the good work. Don't you love being in the studio or anywhere for that matter and the song just all of a sudden clicks..great job!
Oh Wow! This is better than gorgeous! Fantastic instrumentals and amazing vocal (what a voice!) I wanted to give this way more than the maximum 6. Everyone once in a while a gem comes along, and this is a 24 carat diamond. Thank you so much for sharing this amazing music!
You are all to be commended on a stirring performance!
Very best wishes...Kerri Powles
Comment Written 12-Sep-2013
reply by the artist on 12-Sep-2013
Thanks for your wonderful comments , I will let the crew know and will put more Sonia Eden music up later, but I have to ask her which songs as I did not write all her stuff.
reply by Kerri Powles on 12-Sep-2013
That's great! Really looking forward to hearing more!