I think the song is nice and could be better with a couple of changes. I felt that the singing was somehow a little bit off throughout the song. I believe it was slightly flat. You might want to check that, it's easy to do. The other thing to consider is that the chorus and verses both have nice melodies, but they are extremely similar, so it doesn't feel much like a change in the music. Maybe add an instrument to the chorus or change the rhythm so it feels more different. The guitar work is excellent. With a couple of changes this could be brilliant. By the way, it should be "It's Not Right" - "it's" being a contraction of it and is, if that matters to you. Anyway, didn't want to sound so negative, the overall sound and melody is very pretty.
we know we're good lol.. it was fun doin this and your voice is so much better then mine, awesome job ali.. and thank you.. i really needed another jam buddy..by the way you are now an official member of whoman beenz..welcom to our tiny family.. and billy says hi :)